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ahh!! that was a really awesome chappie!! poor will!!! he is so abused and adorable, but jack will make him feel better!! *cheers* thank you sooo much! you're the best!! please please please write more sooN!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses*

fabulous as always! Wonderful, yet slightly depressing. Hmmm, can we get to the sex now? Anywho, I was a bit confused about how at the beginning the gang called him a faggot and then the second time, they wanted to rape him. Are they just hypocrites? Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon.

~df~

thank you, thank you. I love this fic. I'm glad you are taking the time to develop a history with Jack and Will. By the time they ..um..consumate.. their relatiop itp it ought to be really hot. I love you

Oh my god, wonderful!!! Better and better, really!
Yay, welcome Ana :D And I HATE Will's father! Poor little Will, I hope that Jack now could make him feel better... and not alone... *sighs*
(Ah, the photo that you posted... *dies* lol)
Can I ask you when the next update will be? O:) Thank you!
*hugs*

Keep it up! When will Will start to like Jack back? LoL I just rhymed twice in a row! Go me! :)

Okay, first of all, forgive me for not reviewing on the picture. (*saved it and the website*) *bows head in shame*

Second, WOW! HOLY SHIT! FUCKING AMAZING!! *gets whapped by Will and Jack*

Will: What she means to say is--

Elven: *claps hand over his mouth and interuppts* I said EXACTLY what I meant to say, William dearest. HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS WAY COOL!

Jack: *gags her*

Elven: (*muffled because of gag*) Bondage excites me, pirate. *winks in order to make Will blush*

Will: *blushes (of course)*

Jack: *grins at Elven* Is that so, elf?

Elven: (*has managed to wriggle free and undo gag*) *nods* You didn't notice my corset? Unlike Elizabeth, /I/ can actually breathe in one. *grins proudly* (VERY cute outfitw! Iw! I loved it and I have a skirt like that! *giggles*)

Will: You just like the fact that she said that Jack wanted to fiddle with your hair. *scowls*

Elven: *shrugs* Well, that too. That was fun. Poor Jack, no threesome for you!

Jack: *is too busy trying to undress Will, who keeps fidgeting and smacking his hands away, to respond* Aww, c'mon Will. I needed some lovin'! And the tempting pigtails...*waves hand at Elven, who is perched in Ana's lap*

Will: *scowls some more and moves to the other side of Elven and Ana* Stop...

Jack: But WHY!?

Will: *huffs* Because you were checking out her -(*points to Elven, who shrugs*)- AND you let her -(*points to Anamaria, who is feeling up Elven*)- molest me! *scowls*

Jack: You're not interested in just a LITTLE bit of action, Will?

Elven: If I may so bold as to inject my professional opinion, -(*Will glares, and Jack mumbles "Tha's /my/ line...why do they keep using me lines?"*)- It was a an excellent chapter, Jack didn't get with me and Ana, because, like I said, I wanted Ana to me onesies, and you, Will, are now forced to be with the one person who really, actually cares for you. *points to Jack*

Jack: You know what, you should introduce her to Seraphina.

Elven: *confused* Ana?

Jack: *shakes head* No, the author.

Elven: *shrugs* Maybe. (*turns to you*) You have MSN or Windows messenger? If you do, just add me address (*points to email*) and I'll talk to you sometime, savvy?

Will: Why are you two ignoring me?

Jack: *look surprised* Now, how could we ignore you?

Elven: You're dressed so adorably! *motions to the bondage-y outfit he's still wearing*

Jack: *snickers*

Will: *looks mortified and scowls* (*mumbling*) Well, /you're/ still dressed up too, Elven...*scowls some more and pulls at shirt to cover his stomach*

Elven: *looks down at corset, skirt and boots* Hey, whelp, I like it. *twirls and then grins, revealing the fangs*

Jack: *cups her chin and pries open her mouth to look at the teeth* Damn, those are sharp...

Will: *keeps his mouth shut and swats away Jack's hands when he tries to do the same to him* Shtop you!

Elven: *giggles at Will* You need to speak with them! You slur, lad!

Jack: *laughs as Will scowls*

Elven: *stretches* Well! I'm going to go. *grabs Ana and goes to other room*

Jack: *eyes widen*

Will: *jaw drops*

Jack: *cs Wis Will's teeth since his mouth is open*

Will: *snaps mouth shut and scowls when he realizes that Jack is getting ideas* Don't even think about it, pirate.

Jack: *smirks and grabs Will around the waist, dumping him on the bed* I make the rules around here, whelp.

Will: *watches as Jack fiddles with his boots* Eep!

Elven: *comes back in* Boys, you need to take it to another room! Don't just stand there and embarrass poor Will in front of the author! Oh, and by the way...

...I loved it! The chapter was loverly and you don't disappoint! I hope you update soon so I can watch the slashy goodness between me boys!

*watches Jack hoist Will onto his shoulder and disappear into the room that Ana is in, while Will blushes violently*

Well, I'm sorry, I must be going. So if you'll excuse me, I have voyeuristic tendecies. *raises eyebrows andrts rts to run into room*

I email you soon! *grins and disappears into room*

Elven

P.S. I hope this was amusing. I like doing these! *giggles*

You are just very very good. Or very very bad, if that's what you prefer... *g*
In any case, I probably don't have to spell out how much I'm liking this story.
More, please.

you cant leave it like that you have to put the next chapter up soon.Please.

omg i love it YAY!!!!!!! :) keep it comming you are soooo good at this. oh how i love au fics hehe and i can totaly sympathize with you. im blessed with not so great parents/family in general ugh. twice as worse when ur gay but hey much love to you!! and more asap:)

“I… I don’t have a home… I have nothing… I’m alone… completely alone.”....... *sobs* That chapter was all sad and angsty!! Jack obviously need to 'comfort' Will. *rapidly moves eyebrows up and down* New chapter PLEASE!!! I want it NOW!!!! (Ugh, I HATED that chick.)