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Thanks - your fab update made my day!!!! Loved Ana, hated Gov Swann, and as always swooned over Jack and his hog....and poor Will all soaked and weepy *sigh* LUV the angst! This just continues to get better with each new chappie - the only problem is I'm desperate for more - please - please - please update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

squee!!!!!! so so so so so good! Brave!Jack to the rescue once again! and annamaria puking her guts out - lol! ok, babbling now. keep up the good work girlie! Oh, and also, pathetically, can I appeal to people to read/review my fic? it's my very first fic ever, so i'm kinda nervous/want to know how crap it is! it's a songfic called 'Wherever You Will Go' ta muchly! mwah!

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pointy-eared elf princeling shagger

*Drools over the idea of Anamaria in vinyl and fishnets*

Whups, my secret's out :p

Yet another fantabulous chapter. You update so often it's making me feel very ashamed.

Poor Will. He just can't seem to get a break, can he?

Gah! I miss going out all gothed up. This chapter is making me nostalgic, its been so long. Love the Orli in goth gear. It's killing me in fact just imagining the prettiness. Nice chapter overall, as well. I'm liking this story very much thus far. Keep up the goth- er, I mean good work.

I hate you, you know that? I got all excited because I thought you updated... But NNOOOO!!!!! you had to post the dumb pic! (which I loved and saved!).......... No! I didn't mean it!!!! Forgive me!!!!! *kisses your feet*

I have seen him in that outfit before, I'm so pissed at myself that I didn't think of it when you were describing Will in the 'rejected vampire' wardrobe. Oh well, memories suck. Good luck with your laptop and disk and computer gods. We all need luck in that DEPPartment. (Sorry, couldn't help it. :P)

Love it. Love you. Write more. Soon.
Now I can't stop picturing Will in that outfit. Poor me...

Elven: Okay, YES I'm reviewing again, and it's because I love the story!

Jack: *rolls eyes* You know, she -(*points to Elven*)- won't tell you so I guess I'll have to. She wants to--*gets tackled by Elven and a hand clapped over her mouth* Mmph!

Elven: I'll not have you tell the author! *shakes finger at him*

Will: *sighs exasperatedly* Would you mind if I told the author? I wouldn't...let's say...'spin any unnecessary elaborate details into it'?

Elven: *frowns* I'm not sure I want anyone to tell the author. It's kind of embarrassing...*scraches head sheepishly*

Will: *pats her back comfortingly* Are you sure?

Elven: *sighs* Fine. Go ahead and tell them, but do you mind if I leave first?

Will: *shakes head* Not at all. Go on.

Elven: *bows and leaves the room, first snatching Jack by the collar and dragging him to the other room with her*

Will: Okay, what she wanted to say is that she (Elven) would probably be in one of those fetish clubs like that which you have written, or are getting ready to write. What I'm trying to say is that it might be humorous to see her in one, but I'm not sure why. It just strikes me as funny for Will in your story to see someone like her (not normal, and freakishly outgoing), someone that seems to find his situation amusing, in a club like that. Don't ask, it is a very morbid humor that Elven finds in this.

(*you hear from other room Elven shouting "Damn pirate! You'll become one of the eunuchs you're always making fun of! Don't touch my rum!"*)

Will: O__o? Okay...anyways...She wants to know if you'd write her into your story--

-(*hear from other room Elven shouting "/AMAZING/ STORY! /INCREDIBLE/ STORY! Damnit! Get it right, WHELP!"*)-

Will: *grumbles* Anyways, dress her up any way you like if you'd be so kind as to put her in the story, but she wants at least knee high bondage-y bo Fan Fangs, collars, makeup, whatever you want, she's all for it. *thinks* Let's see...she's got straight red hair, grey/green eyes, and fair skin, I guess. And, she's *actually* as outgoing as Jack from the movie.

-(*hear Elven grumbling from other room*)-

Will: *glares at door* Stop you're pouting, wench!

-(*hear Jack saying "Tha's MY line, whelp!"*)-

Will: *shouts back at the other two in the room* Stop calling me that! *pouts* You guys suck so much...

-(*Jack snickers and Elven mutters "I know Jack certainly does."*)-

Will: *scowls some more* I'm not going to say anymore about this writing in a character for a the next chapter anymore, Elven!

Elven: *appears in the door and sticks out her tongue anime-style*

Will: *rubs temples as Elven disappears into the other room again* Bloody surrounded by them...

Toodles!

P.S. Will: It's just a suggestion...*Will gets whapped by Elven* Okay, she's asking outright *gets whapped again* Damnit, wench! *sighs* Fine, she's 'gotten down on her knees and asking -(*stops another pillow hitting him*)- /begging/ to be in the club. *snatches pillow from Elven and throws it at her* Stop doing that! I was trying to talk!

Ta!

thanks. that's an awesome site. Happy New Year!!!! Look forward to your next offerings!

Warning - major gushing ahead....Thank you for struggling with the computer gremlins to bring your fans another brilliant chappie. I love this fic!!!!! It gets better and better with each new update. The way you are taking your time with the development of their relationship is sooo wonderful and amazing. You've found the perfect blend of sweetness, sexiness and angst. Favorite moment - Jack flushing Will's Tom B soap sculpture, my first LOL fan fic moment of the new year. Already desperate for your next chapter - update soon - PLEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*squees*

Please update soon! I lurve it so much, and that outfit on Will was making me drool. I LOVE bondage boots; they're so much fun! Buckles, and lace up...*drools some more* He sounded so hot! And you got a bit of slashy Jack/Will goodness, even if it was just Jack's imagination.

Jack: *hangs head*

Elven: Why don't you just TELL him how you feel, pirate?

Will: Well, we're not talking about YOUR story, Elven, we're talking about THIS story.

Elven: *shrugs* So, you want me to call him 'biker'?

Jack: *whaps them both with pillows*

Elven: *scowls* I'm not sure I deserved that!

Jack: Tha's MY line, lass!

Will: *shrugs* Oh, Jaaaack! lvenlven: *smirks as Will trails his fingers over Jack's chest*

Jack: *growls* Now's not a time to tempt me, whelp...

Elven: Jaaack?

Jack: Can't any of you say me bloody name right?! Why are you all drawling?

Will: Cause it's amusing to hear you all hot and bothered.

Elven: You know that Barbossa says it like that, too.

Will: *giggles and then gets tackled by Jack onto the couch*

Elven: *rolls eyes* Completely hopeless...*sighs*

Anyways, I hope you update REALLY soon, and hopefully some SLASHY ACTION BETWEEN JACK AND WILL?!

Ta!

Elven