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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Violet Bunny
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh!!! I love this fic sooooooo much. You have to totally update it soon. This is the first Pirates of the Carribean AU fic I've read, and I love it immensely. I like the way you characterized Jack and Will. When is Will going to start liking Jack? Oh Come on *whines pathetically* More more more!!!!! I wanna know what happens next. You are doing a wonderful job at this fic. LOTR Rocks!!!
person Carmela
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!
We are all aching for more!!!
Update, te, te, update...
Please, please...
person kami anya
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I haven't actually finished the fic yet...but had to review. Do you realize how rare it is to find someone who is interested in all the same things as you and who also writes good fanfiction? Anime, Voltaire (I just got the CD with "Vampire Club" on it today, although I've had it for ages on a mix my friend made me), lotr, grim adventures of billy and mandy, um...there was more to it than that, but I can't remember what now.
Anyways, wh men mentioned the fact this fic is good, I meant REALLY good. For ages now, whenever I read a fic, I've found myself editting it. In this one, I haven't found one thing that needs changing. And the characters are well done.
You know, I'm really glad I got the "Pirates of the Caribean" (sp? I know I spelled something wrong, but it's 2:00 am....) DVD today...as I was watching all the special features (I'm saving the movie itself for tomorrow, as well as my new "The Two Towers" LotR DVD), it occured to me what a great couple Jack and will would make. And being the yaoi fan I am, I came to this section, found your fic, started reading.....And only stopped in order to write this review before I forgot all I wanted to say.
^^
back to reading chapter 7! yay!
person ButterBalls
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank ye thank ye thank ye! Just in time for Christmas ^_^ LMAO @ Jack's pizza conspiracy theory. Still gagging for the slash...but I'll just trust that you'll chuck it in when the time is right.
person Mahie Sparrow
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was priceless!!! Jack being so nice to Will,"Lord of the Cock Rings" MWAHAHWHUAMWA...I loved this chapter!!!! It's so funny when Jack starts slashing the LOTR characters!!! And it was so cute that they are becoming kind of friends. I loved this! I found it particularly interesting because *I* went to see LOTR - FOTR the extended version at the movies yesterday. When I got home,there was the ninth part of this fic with Jack and Will watching FOTR the extended version! Weird...very weird. :) Oh,Gods I can't wait to see ROTK!!! By the way,Lydia,hope you have a nice Christmas!!! Thanks for updating sooner again! Can't wait to read next chapter now that Jack is nicer to W :) :)
person dark vampire
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh!!!! so damn sexy!! jack is sooo sexy and 'nice' and cool and wonderful!!!! yeah!!! will is all adorable and sweet and innocent! poor baby!!! *huggles* but jack is taking good care of him!!! *cheers* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! i love this fic sooo much! and i can't wait until jack and will get together!! they are sooo perrrrfect for each other, now that jack it becoming such a good person!!! *glomp* i love you!!!! *kisses* please write more soon!!!! *more kisses*
person Raffie
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Squueeee, they're so sweet!! I love that they're beginning to get along.... Really great chapter, as always... and the references to LOTR, LOL... Good idea ;)! Thank you again!
person Morlwen
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, again, I love this story so much, I look forward to your updates, and I love all the LOTR's stuff ( me being a big fan) this fic is the best, when do they hook up though?
person Ibonekoen
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh, I am most intrigued. I can't wait to see where this goes, and my gosh, poor Will! *huggles him* Wow, you're very good at conveying emotions in your scenes.
person JackSparrowsWhore
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! You have to write more! Poor destressed little William! Also was very delighted with reference to IHOP....mmmmm fat.....hmm what? oh yes good job! Keep writing!