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Hey! I just wanted to say this is the best POTC fan fic I've read in a long time. Can we get some Elizabeth/Ana Maria though? ;) Elizabeth has to get some action ya know! :) I really love your story! Keep up the good work!

Hi luv! Thanks for updating sooner! I love this fic!!!! I'm so sorry for Will. Poor baby. :( I was reading one of the reviews and I agree with whoever wrote that. Jack could show a little care for Will,as it's obvious he likes the boy and he's soft. :) Can't wait to see Jack softening more...I love that...something that starts with hatred and fear and then become love. :) I can't wait to see them really in love with one another. :) And yeah,you better update soon 'cause we want to know what the heck Jack's father has done. ^_^
Hope you had a great time yesterday with ROTK! :))) Luv and kisses,Mahie

brilliant update! a few days of waiting seems like years to me!
its really funny when will says to jack tt jack is is father! wat a violent daddy! god helps will!!!
n dun dun leave it hanging there.. how long do i haf to wait for another updates? :)

oh my, i know i am lazy to review, sol inl in one, it´s just wonderful!!!!! hope to read the next chapter soon and that the relationship between those two becomes better!!

This just gtting beter and better!! LOL!! Please update soooonnnnn!!!!

You made my whole day....well your new chapter and the fact that I got to ROTK really but still i was very pleased to see that you had posted an other chapter...I'm really really enjoying this fic....along with all your other ones. Glad to see that Jack tried to feed Will, sad though how they didn't actually get to eat any of it...poor Willy must still be hungry....
And whats this about Jack's father was he abusive???? Does Jack have a home somewhere???? You should make him take Will there....that is if he does... I love the angst in this story but I really want the romance to start happening too!!! Please post more soon....savvy?

J4T

:)

This is fantastic. Two gorgeous guys and a bike, who could ask for more? Will is soooo sweet, and Jack's 'flashback' was brilliant, can't wait to see how their relationship shapes up. Please update soon!

AHH! You updated!! My hope is restored!!!..... ok, enough of that crap, this was a really good chapter! I was laughing pretty hard at the whole "Will is mute and dumb" stuff. Poor Will! New chapter please! Pretty Please? *gives puppy eyes*

Lol, IHOP is definitely wide spread, from California to Florida. It’s one of my favorite restaurant and I remembettintting the Rooty Tooty Fresh and Fruity meal many times…yummy *drools*. Anyways, very good and I cannot wait till you update, god this is an exciting tale, I don’t know WHY I didn’t start reading this till today!

Luv, Edward Uwnhai Silverfang

I couldn't stop laughing, I liked the car part, and Jack and will *squeels in delight*