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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First time I found your story and I saw it was a AU I thought it wouldn't have any interest... Now, I have to say I am enjoying this story a lot. It is really good,illiilling and touching at the same time. I loved this chapter! You managed to mix angst and dark situations with some kind of tenderness I really love. Jack's thoughts about Will are very well written, I think (although I am not english-speaker), because they are so contradictory, and there is so much loveliness deep in him... I hope we will soon know how is Will feeling towards Jack. I mean, we already know he is very scared of him, but... does he feel any kind of attraction, or affection? Sure he does (I do!!! lol!) Poor Will deserves to exorcice that horrible first time he had, and Jack should know it... Please, anocther chapter soon!!! Please!!! please!!!! Please!!!
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my... this is soooooo good, poor will! he is all adorable and vulnerable and sad!!! jack will take care of him... eventually!! *sweatdrop* what about elizabeth and anamarie? that will be sooo cute!!!! i love you!!! *glomp* you are wonderful and amazing and super duper awesome!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you!!!! *more kisses* i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please write more soon! *huggels*
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"...pooped itself out of my sick little head..." *Stares at line for a good 5 minutes.* To think that you actually thought that, and then actually put it down in your story. That is the funniest damn thing I have ever heard. OMG! That is just so HIGH-larious it is inconceivable! (I love that word! Watch the movie 'The Princess Bride' and you will love it too. It is a great movie, trust me. Watch it.) Anywho. I havn't quite gotten to your story yet but trust me I will and I think I will have to read all your stories just because of that one line. That is just too funny. I thought I would just tell you that. Ok now I am going to go read now. Bye Bye!
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I'm sorry, I have to do this: it's 'We cannot linger', as opposed to 'We must not'. God, can you *tell* I'm a fangirl? *puts head in a box*
Oh, right, the chapter. Keep 'em comiFor For crying out *loud*, girl, work on Will a bit! He has to warm up to Jack *sometime*!
He will, right? *looks around nervously* Right?
But ja. Loving it all so far. Hate Govenor Swann. Want to impale him on a rusty prong-type thing, like in Halloween Resurrection.
Oh, right, the chapter. Keep 'em comiFor For crying out *loud*, girl, work on Will a bit! He has to warm up to Jack *sometime*!
He will, right? *looks around nervously* Right?
But ja. Loving it all so far. Hate Govenor Swann. Want to impale him on a rusty prong-type thing, like in Halloween Resurrection.
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
one of the best potcb fics ive read, update soon pleese
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Will. Is he going to escape long enough to find a phone only to find out that his father considers him as a liability straight from the horse's mouth? It was hard enough on him to hear that the ransom wasn't paid from his kidnapper but to actually hear it straight from a parent would be devestating.
Anyway, keep writing and update often.
Anyway, keep writing and update often.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good update soon please.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo!!! It's so good to see another chapter up!!!! I just love this story! :) Poor Will he must be so so so scared I'm glad Jack didn't have the heart to rape him though. You should make Jack drive them through a drive through or something after hearing the poor boys stomach lingling. Just a thought it would be cute to show a little care. Stupid Swann I can't believe he wouldnt pay the ransom....what an ass!!!! And he probably hasn't called the police or anything...afraid to ruin his "image" Well anyways. I love this story please please please update soon!!!!!
S/N RETURN OF THE KING!!!!WOOHOO!!!! YES! It does come out in 6 days :)
:)
J4T
S/N RETURN OF THE KING!!!!WOOHOO!!!! YES! It does come out in 6 days :)
:)
J4T
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aawwww! ok, now I LOVE YOU!!! ;) Lol!!! Great chapter!! Sweeeeeet!!! Now I can't wait a whole week, I'll die sooner :D ;)
many many kisses Raff
many many kisses Raff
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, it lot loved this chapter as well, don´t know if i review before, but i do now, so hope tha´s all right:)
was hoping for some time now that the story will reach this point, now it starts to get to the most interesting points, already looking forward to the next chapter. just glad that jack didn´t take will, am curious though how you will make will relax a lil bit more around jack, i mean will is still frightened that he´ll be raped by jack, but please don´t let will get away from him, just let jack slip a lil bit about the phone call, so that will knows that his father.... that his fathers opinion on him has changed, ok??
keep it coming, what ever you decide to write, just post it SOON!!!!!
love muckl
was hoping for some time now that the story will reach this point, now it starts to get to the most interesting points, already looking forward to the next chapter. just glad that jack didn´t take will, am curious though how you will make will relax a lil bit more around jack, i mean will is still frightened that he´ll be raped by jack, but please don´t let will get away from him, just let jack slip a lil bit about the phone call, so that will knows that his father.... that his fathers opinion on him has changed, ok??
keep it coming, what ever you decide to write, just post it SOON!!!!!
love muckl