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oh, it lot loved this chapter as well, don´t know if i review before, but i do now, so hope tha´s all right:)
was hoping for some time now that the story will reach this point, now it starts to get to the most interesting points, already looking forward to the next chapter. just glad that jack didn´t take will, am curious though how you will make will relax a lil bit more around jack, i mean will is still frightened that he´ll be raped by jack, but please don´t let will get away from him, just let jack slip a lil bit about the phone call, so that will knows that his father.... that his fathers opinion on him has changed, ok??
keep it coming, what ever you decide to write, just post it SOON!!!!!
love muckl

Wow! This is a really great story! And what I change of events! I would have been super pissed if Jack had raped him... but I would still keep reading it. :P New chapter soon please! I can't ! I ! I really can't!!!

Absolutely bloody fabulous. Your writing keeps impressing me, thank you for that.
I can't wait to see how the guys get together, seeing as there may be tru trust issues... *g*

You're Great as always!!!
Thanks again, and please update soon!! I can't wait... aaww and that kiss!! *.*
Kisses Raff

I most say that this is the best potc i have ever read!!!

WOW!! I LOOOOVVEEE this story! Please update soon!!!!!

Hi Lydia,it's so great!!!!! Wow!!!! I loved that! It was so cute when Jack kissed Will after he said he was adopted. awwwww I love them so much! Jack couldn't really be a kidnapper. He's too soft. LOL But I like him this way. :) I can't wait for them to get together! Hope they make love soon! :) Ah,by the way,I wasn't thinking about a threesome to my fic,no,just Will to get a little confused and maybe kiss Charles once or twice willingly. But of course he's staying with Jack in the end. :) And no way to have a Jack/charles/Will thing,Jack would never have Charles,LOL. Well,I'll be looking forward to next week's chapter! Don't ye dare to forget it! LOL just kidding luv,have a nice weekend too! :) Bye!

YES!!! Jack kissed Will! More more more! I love the line that goes "what is it with older men and finding everthing I do enticing?" Poor Will, its not just older men, its a bunch of obssessive fangirls too! Must be hard to be so damn sexy. Speaking of sexy, please please please make that threat about Jack taking all of Will's clothes away happen, that would hysterical. And speaking of hysterical, I loved Elizabeth's 'ride of death' in the limo, very funny. Anyway, can't wait for more tension between Will and Jack, each little bit drives me crazy!

I love you.

Wow! Cha Chapter! Damn! Barbossa must had been planning for a long time, to get Avery into his plan! And totally loving stalker abeit drunk n ranting Gibbs. It such a change frm his usual role that it refreshing! Hahah finally Jack gets to be alone with the whelp! Heheh am I the only one loving how Jack detests Will at this point of time? :D Haha definately can see Jack watching Cartoon Network, and thumbs up to the cheese rice thingy, it does sound de-licous! The talking out loud's great too, gives us a view to how Jack's mind works, and it works totally for terrifying Will that he been kidnapped by a apparently rambling goofy mad Jack :) Woow will Bardossa track our dear heroes down and be the villian of the show again? Update again soon dear :) !