rate_review Reviews

I am really loving this story, although it is quite different from any other potc fics i've read. i'm enjoying the characterization of jack as amoral, much less honorable than he appears in the movie, however, i'm still wondering if he'll eventually break down and let out a hidden, compassionate side. basically i just want more! more chapters! more updates! info about jack's past? *hopeful*

poor will!!! he is soooo abused!!! *hugs* jack will take care of him... sort of... heh.... well, i am sure that jack will really take car him him later when it gets all yummy and romanic!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kiss* thanx!! please write more sooN!

I can tell you that your fic it's absolutely great!! Poor Orli, I like the way you characterized him... and Johnny too!! Aww, I think that now the most interesting part will begin... I can't wait to see the developments between them... there'll be developments,
won't there?? I hope that J will help Orli somehow...
I read in the reviews that you have 13 chapters written, Having read only the first 5... may I ask you when the others will be
available, or if maybe - begging puppy eyes - you could do me the HUGE favor of sending them privately to me? I can't resist, I have to read what's next as soon as possible! :D
Thanks anyway, and keep up the good work, you're great!!

Ooooo! I love this story! I don't usually read AU, finding it just too...well, weird...but this one is great. They don't seem too OOC for an AU; I'm impressed. And I am DYING to see Jack and Will shag! Get on with it already :p Or at least *really* build up the suspense for a couple of chapters and make their eventual union explosive.

Hiya! I just love this story! Well, I love any story you've written, and I'm hoping for more of all of them. Is that too much to ask? What if I beg *pretty please!*

Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu

ahhhhhhhhH!!!! this is sooooooo awesome and exciting and poor adorable will!! everyone wants him!!! *snicker* but jack will take care of him!!! *cheers* thank you soooooo much!!! i love this fic sooo much!!! you are soooooooo amazing!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *more kisses* please write more soohat hat will happen to poor will? will elizabeth be all freaked out and try to rescue him? (hey! it's like the movie... but reversed!!! *giggles*) anyway! i am soooooo excited for the next chapter! so write more super fast or i'll die of anticapation!!! *more kisses*

Mmm...Jack in leather on a Harley...THANK YOU SANTA!!! I have to admit, I'm not a big fan of AU's but I read the description and just had to read it, well I'm now officially converted to AU's all because of you! What a fabulously original idea, I love it! I can hardly wait for the dependant/provider aka-hostage/kidnapper chemistery to start. Go ahead Jack, take advantage of our innocent little William all ripe for corruption! Mwa ha ha ha ha-ahem, (clears throat) that is to say, um...keep of the good work, can't wait for more. Years of Cheers, Thanks a Ton, Citadel!

Hi Lydia!!!
It's great!! Can't wait to read more! Hope Will and Jack get together soon! I loved when Jack saved Will from that damned coach. Just to point a gun at his head...lol...but I'm willing to see how they are going to fall in love,I'm curious! Maybe they will have to do something about Gibbs,right? He's so bad! :P Hope he doesn't rape Will too. :(
Thanks thanks for posting! Cheers,Mahie

I like this one to. I love AUs they make a story that mucch ich interresting and I like how you are portraying the charicters here except for gibbs I hope Jack beats the s*** out of him. So please up date sorry and sorry about any misspelled words.

ahh! this is sooooooo amazing and wonderful and poor adorable will!!! jack will have to take good care of him! ahh! *sob* poor will!! at least he has elizabeth!!!! i really love this fic!!! i love it so so so much!!! well... i kinda' like a nice gibbs better than an evil one... he was always so funny and kind-ish.... now he is scary... like the coach... who is damn evil!! poor wilL!!!! *more sobbing* but anyway.. this is perrrrfect and i can't wait fou tou to write more!!! please!!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thanx!