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Hi!

Cool beginnig, haha ur Elizabeth is so cute, haha like the idea of her in braids, haha very different frm t cool, composed elegant image in the movies. Ohhh...evil Gibbs, this I got to see, you got to tell us more why Gibbs wants Will so much. Poor Will date raped and his first time too, cant wait to see how things unfold, esp the kidnapping part. You go Gal! And cwaitwait to see more of Jack in action! :D the Pearl bike was a nice touch certainly could see it standing for freedom :D

ooo i like it a lot! very dark and crud, i hope Jack will make will feel better...

i love the PotC and TloTr references... hee hee hee hee

Keep it up yea. and some such!

That's great! Please post up the rest of the story now *begs*

Wow, that was really good! Write more fast! *evil rabid fic bunnies jump on lostmarbles, chanting: more more more more* Don't mind me, I'm insane. And a slash lover. *whisltes innocently* Awesome fic! Great plotline! And how is Coach Avery (A very large...) going to fit into this? You're such a great writer! *huge hugs*

Rancid! That's the band that does "Time Bomb". ^.^ Ahh, this chapter was nice and long... which was actually somewhat aggravating seeing as right now I'm supposed to be studying for the two tests I have tomorrow. Damn you, college! *shakes fist at nothing in particular* This fic looks quite interesting; I'm definitely going to be obsessively monitoring the updates. Mwahahahaha! Hopefully, that won't make your progress suddenly stagnate. ._. I think I'm like the Kiss of h foh for the updating of webpages/fanfiction... dammit! I'm sorry! I'm also sorry I'm rambling, rambling, rambling --*slaps self* Anyway, before I nance off... you said you don't mind constructive criticism, so I'd like to contribute. I'm not trying to be bitchy, really... I just think that, eh, sometimes people can over-dramatize... like having the characters shouting/yelling every other line... eh, I dunno, maybe it's just my being nitpicky. ._. Anyway, I'kin\kin' it bunches, so keep up the good work! It's always nice to have something to allow me to procrastinate and screw off further.

To anser your question, Yes there is a Port Royale, Jamaca, That is where the movie story-line was set. There is also a Port Royal Minnesota, one in New Jersy, and one in North Dakota; take your pick... Good Story idea, keep it up.

I read your story on the charactersinbloom yahoogroup message board, and I absolutley loved it. You note at the end of your poste the that you have 13 chapters written, and you have 13 weeks to write a conclusion. Does that mean you are going to post one chapter a week? I'm a fic whore when it comes to a story I love, and I think I'll die from want if I wait that long. Can we please have an extra special treat and get your next post a little sooner. If not, I certainly won't complain...I'll just mope a little;)