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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person C. Marie
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER FUCKING CLIFF HANGER!!!!! GOD DAMN IT!!!! Awesome write so far by the way. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU JUST LEFT THE STORY TO END LIKE THAT!!!! YOU BETTER KEEP WRITING MORE CHAPTERS!!! No but, seriously, an awesome write!! I love this story so far. Great plot. Romance, angst, humor, adventure, and not to mention, (though I will anyway) hot gay sex between Jack and Will!!! GOD DAMN YOU FOR THE EVIL FUCKING CLIFF HANGERS!!! YOU HAVE TO LET ME KNOW WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP!!! By the way, I LOVE your sense of humor. Heehee...... *snaps outta hyper mood and random thoughts about 'positions' for Will and Jack to glare evily at you* KEEP WRITING MORE CHAPTERS!!! *goes back into odd hyper mood*
person moonlit-leaf
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you finally updated! I have been waiting soo long for this chapter, and I wasn't disappointed! Love this story! But you left us with a cliffy. How cruel can you be, and you separated again! Noooooo!
person Sara
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I have been following it for so long and I can't wait until Jack and Will reunite once again.
person Amanda
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In a way, I'm sorry that Govenor Swan died. I was hoping Will could wave the fact that he was right about Barbossa under his nose.
person INu
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue please :)
person Willsdarkangel
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lydia...this has always been one of my most favorite stories, all kinds of yummy good slashiness!!

Willsdarkangel
person american women
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HELLZ YA I LOVE CARTOON NETWORK!!!!!! You should watch adult swim sometime!!!!!! GO BENDER!!!!!!!!
man these guys are nuts....will's life sucks.....But jack in biker clothes is sssooooooo Hot dude!!!!!!DUDE!!!!!!THAT IS SO TOTALLY MESSED WHAT WILLS OLD MAN DID!!!!!
person Emo lover
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love hot topic!!!!!! OMFG!!!!! the beuties that come out of there....ORGASUM IN BLACK LEATHER (begins to drool)
person Brown eyed girl
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
isn't that song from DUMBO? though i think they edittedit some(basterds)
person hogo-chan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! when you gonna finish?