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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Must say I love this story. But I must point out a large plot hole. In chapter 10 you have Will chained to the bed and in chapter 11 you have him get up and go see what was wrong with Jack. I may have missed a part where jack releases will but I dont think I did. Suggestions for fixing this could be Jack drugs Will to make him sleep deeply, Jack feels guilty, etc... What ever its your story. I just thought you would like to be informed.
Keep up the good work
Keep up the good work
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(1) I have no idea what Will’s zodiac sign is, but Orlando is a Capricorn so I decided to use it for shits and giggles. I’m a zodiac nut and every Earth sign I’ve ever known always fucking plods along at their own damn pace! Especially the Capricorn males! Uuuurrrrrggg!
In defense of myself and my fellow Capricorns: you're absolutely right. Nyah! ; p
Love the fic! Methinks it rocks totally.
In defense of myself and my fellow Capricorns: you're absolutely right. Nyah! ; p
Love the fic! Methinks it rocks totally.
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've left all your loyal readers sitting on the quivering edge! Have some mercy and give us an update! It's like reading a really great novel only to find the last few pages are missing!!!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was so sad and continue please thanks! :)
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stayed up all night to read this in one long haul... please update soon again? I love it...
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess. im about to fucking die. you have no idea what this story has done to me!!! you have to update soon because i swear i'll go insane if you dont! please, please, please. you're definitly my fucking hero!!! update as soon as you can! my sanity relies on it.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I love this story so much and it took you so looooooooong to put this last chapter up!!! TT_TT You NEEEEEEEEEEEEED to put some more chaps up PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!! This is one of my favorit fanfics... SO UPDATE MORE!!! *holds gun meenisingly* Hehehehehe..... or else., and I mean that in the nicest way possible. ^_^
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you updated, and I'm so glad you like us over here in jolly old England! please bring us more soon!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! you updated! great chapter, can't wait to read more.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So great to see a new chapter up, I was dying to see how this ended and I cant wait to read the next chapter - keep up the good work :o)