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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, All i have to say is, NO MORE RAPE SCENES please..I know you ddn't ADD any of them after the first few chapters BUT; i don't know why but i tend to STAY away from 'RAPE' of any kind between Male protangonist characters..This story is good andi hope too read more..
I think Will'z had enough, don't you..If you do intend to add to 'Rape' scene, consider the girl 'Liz'..I don't even care about her character at all..I honestly just skim through all her parts and whoever else and ONLY read Will/Jack's parts..LOL...
I mean, i don't mind reading, beating's,blood, whatever, just no 'Rape'....It's just tooo horrible and yes, i know this is a FANFIC but still, once is enough..I think and hope it was once only...
Love Jack's character thou..And Will..
Kepp it up and looking forward to see what will happen between the two...On with the show, i say..Chapter 35..
I think Will'z had enough, don't you..If you do intend to add to 'Rape' scene, consider the girl 'Liz'..I don't even care about her character at all..I honestly just skim through all her parts and whoever else and ONLY read Will/Jack's parts..LOL...
I mean, i don't mind reading, beating's,blood, whatever, just no 'Rape'....It's just tooo horrible and yes, i know this is a FANFIC but still, once is enough..I think and hope it was once only...
Love Jack's character thou..And Will..
Kepp it up and looking forward to see what will happen between the two...On with the show, i say..Chapter 35..
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I'm just glad ye updated!!!!!!! fainlly!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..I'm crying.
This chapters sooo emotional.
This chapters sooo emotional.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having sent the last couple of nights reading this I cant wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also cant wait for te boys to be reunited..... so please keep writing!!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God. I love this story. Please please please keep writing. :D I can't wait for the next part.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter Lydia! Keep up the good work and Update Soon!!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Hoogu-chan: Hey, thanks for the awesome review. I would e-mail you when I updated, but you didn't leave me an address lol! Thanks for your excitement about the fic. I shall try to get more out soon. I've got a buddy that constantly reminds me I need to write more of it every day so don't worry. I don't get off easy. ^_^
~lydia~
Thanks to everyone for the reviews!
~lydia~
Thanks to everyone for the reviews!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals like a squeally fool* oh my god! This has got to be the most amazing fanfiction I have EVER read! I love it so friggin' much! I found it a couple days ago and now I've become addicted! Your writing is so witty and a lot of fun to read! The story is so interesting and the way Jack and Will act with each other is hilarious. the story seems to be really super sad now, but I can't wait to see if Will is successful in running away! I'll die if I don't get to read the next chapter soon! >_< ... wow... I haven't gotten this worked up about a fic in the longest time... ^_^ I your writing skillz are just too awesome! I hope you get the chance to update soon! If it's not too much trouble, could you please email me when you update? so I knowz ta look. If it is too much trouble... I'll probably be looking out for updates anyway! Thanks so much for writing this fic! And I hope you had a good time in London!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hun, you need to update. This story is just too good to keep me on the hook like this.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. that was sad. made me shudder at the beginning when he was cutting...i was glad when it got taken away. poor Will! Running away sounds like a good idea, but I get the feeling he might get caught :( Must go find something happy to read now