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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Daaku!Malik
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update, fucking Goddamnit! >.> I SWEAR. I will kill you. This has pissed me off.

Update, or you die. O.<
person Daaku!Malik
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Wail..- Why won't you update!? I'm running out of Jack/Will stories to keep me from tearing everything apart! ;-;

This was by far the best story in the lot! Why won't you WRITE!? -Strangles.- ._. Cm'on... write more. I mean, it's soooo interesting, and amazing of how the emotions seem to seep into the reader. Sure, their personalities are different... but I like an innocent Will. the blue boxers were funny. They made me spit up my coffeeeeee. x3.

Uhm. If you write more... I'll/// love you forever, and ever, and ever, anc ever... and ever! ;-; I'm cwazy for this story.

<3 always~

Daaku.
person Myeisha
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, you write so well! I only found this site a week ago and as soon as I started reading yours I just couldn't stop! Please please PLEASE keep writing! It also helps that I have all Orlando Bloom's movies and four calendars of him...aaahhh, the sexy man in my life! Best of luck and hope you have lots more ideas! Myeisha - the reality hating bitch of this world
person deathskiss
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story- I look forward to finding out how this all ends!
person Addiction(too tiered to sighn in)
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love you, I'd love more! Have I told t=you that I read the hole thing again when I figure out that you've updated? I've started quoting it at school and no one knows what I'm talking about. *sigh* oh well, I'm dieing for the next chapter.

NEVER STOP WRITING
(or I'll have to eat your spleen)

~ <3 Aden Diction
Addiction
person sallie
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mr. Swann MUST DIE!
And Barbossa, and Norrington, and Gibbs, and...
Maybe you should just kill everybody 'cept Jack, Will, Ana, Lizzie, and the servants.
Lurve this story! ^.^
person Miya Sparrow
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY.....you updated!!!!!!!!!! *sigh* I'm happy. sorry but I don't really no the jokes. just update soon savvy?
person ayachan
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!! that evil evil man!!!!!! please keep up the good work, update asap, and i hope that your situation is getting better right this moment as i type this review :P
person Spike
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg, why Jack, why?!?!? *ahem* Sadnness abounds. I love this story, it's truly something of an old favorite. Can't wait for the next chapter, cause things will get better, right? Right? Sorry, I get emotional. Good thing the house is empty, or my family would think I was crazy. What with me shouting "why Jack, why?!?!?" every few minutes.
person Reb
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY LLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE keep going plewzzzzzzz plewzzzz i`m beggin i`m my frigin knees this wow no words the describe keep going plewzzz

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