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Tsk tsk tsk! It was quite good! I liked the sex scene. don't be /too/ hard on yerself

Lydia, time for you to get cracking on this story and finish it. You have a nice start now see it through. I will look forward to reading more.

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Brilliant. It was great to get away from reading the angstyness of The Price of Rum. This was great, I love it. So, how much do you love Xena? I've noticed a few similarities or 'odes' if you will to the show. Since it is my absolute favorite show in history, I notice these things. The pressure points, now I know their real, to a certain extant, but to my knowledge, not to the capicity that Xena uses them in. (I've studies pressure points in my varying self-defence classes), But enough about Xena, back to Jack and Will. Two SEXY sonsofguns. Poor Will, people always wanten to force their attentions on his hapless young body. Hmmm. Well, at least Jack's there. Yay Jack, he's my-err-Will's man. If he can't do it, no one can. Yaaaaaayyyyy, Jack!!! Sorry, momentary lapse there. No more cheerleader like tendencies. I'm not one really, just sometimes, I get a little over excited. It's the meds. We need to up my dosage, or maybe that's where the trouble started in the first place. I shoulda probably told my doctor I increased my meds. Oh well, no use dwelling on the past. So, yeah, back to a proper review, I love it, it was great, et cetera, et cetera, et cetera *waves hand out in a sweeping gesture in front of body, with ohter hand on hip* (Yule Brenner, the king and I.)
Okay, the end of this review. I've rambled on for long enough.

Jemi

I am so glad I found this story. You did a wonderful job. I am going to go and read the sequel now.......whoosh *runs off to read Price of Rum*

all right, i am nutcase, and i love how you write the characters; you make them all seem so lovable (they all ready are, but you make them more of that). anyway, i like the sappiness of this story -- and i will get around to finishing "the price of rum". Keep he ghe good writing. :)

I think your story is wonderful!! When I read the Price of rum I kept wondering how the met, because your story's AU. They could have met anywhere!!! Pre-rum is a nice side to your main story. Please update Price of rum sooooooon!!!! I need to know what happens next!!!! It's evil to leave cliffs *pout* we fall off um an stuff...but really i need to know, what's next. ^_^

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


How is it possible that this story doesn't have any reviews?????? T?? That was the cutest thing I think I have ever read.... Poor Will getting thrown out by Brown then getting attacked in the bar, only to get attacked again.....once he left the bar!!! Thank god for Jack saving the poor little boy. It's just too cute!!!!!!! I just love it to pieces....you know what you should do? You should write a story, showing what happens between now and the price of Rum even if it is just fluff....I think it would be cute....but please finish the price of rum first! Savvy?

Very cute :)