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Heya -tentative wave- I really like your story and all. Very very nice, and I've just finished reading all you have so far.(I do hope you keep going! ^_^) But I thought I would just add that I don't think they had sofas in their time period or that Miami would of been made...discovered?....around. Yeah that's it-around. Not to be a big flamer, I am diagnosed with OCD(Seriously... -twitch-) so the little things always bother me, making it hard for me to enjoy a read, but your fanfiction is great! I wanted to kill Charles(Maroon, keelhaul, shoot in the head, beat upside the head with a piece of wood, hang, throw overboard, etc.) When he betrayed ack and Will like that! -mock gasp- So evil! and Ragetti is the unsung hero, though he only let them out and got shot... So maybe 'unsung hero' isn't the best word. ^^; I love fanfictions with jack actually being 'human' and all, even the great and infamous Captain Jack Sparrow can have his breakdowns and fears. ^^ Making Will all snively all the time is just....weird... But anyway, love the fic! -thumbs up-

All i can say is :D

Am I a bad person if I'm enjoying Charles' suffering? Yes, I think I am... In any case, I really want to know where you'll take this story. It's been a fun ride so far.

Aww!

Yay, they're a couple again! They're so cute together. I really love the way you write them together. It's so sweet and they've been through so much. My poor dears. I can't wait for you to update! It's so good. I'm totally in love and I want to know what Charles is up to. Was Charles the one that turned Brown against Jack?


~lydia~

*claps hands together*

Elven: Yea! More smut! Hooray!

Will: *blushes uncontrollably* You don've tve to be so loud...*blushes some more*

Elven: *glares at Will* WELL! Neither do you, Mister Turner. *winks*

Will: *buries head in Jack's chest*

Elven: Awww! How sweet! You're still a virgin maiden!

Will: *scowls at Elven* I am NOT a maiden!

Elven: ^__^ Yes, you are!

Jack: 'Tis alright. You're MY maiden.

Will: *mumbling* I'm not a maiden...*pouts*

Elven: Well, you're kinda manly, so I guess that counts...*shrugs*

Jack: Oi! On with the review, lass!

Elven: Oh! Right...

I loved it!

Anamaria: Ragetti an' me? What an interesting couple!

Elven: I would never have thought of that....*hmm*

Anamaria: Oi! *whaps Elven upside the head* Don't even think of stealing her idea! You know what you're doing in your story already, don't change it like you've been doing!

Jack: Well, it's not like she's changing parts that are on already! She jus changes her mind a lot...*huggles Will*

Elven: *whips out a camara and takes a picture of them* How kawaii!!!!

Will: *continues to blush some more*

Elven: Oi! Even more kawaii!!! *glomps Will and Jack* Did you know that you're my idol, Jack?

Jack: Wha'?

Elven: *starts to sing* "Did you ever know that you're my hero? Did you ever--" *gets whapped by pillows* I'm not sure I deserved that!

Jack: Well, you sing terribly, so ye needed to shut yer trap!

Elven: *gets whapped by pillows again when she was about to sing* Bloody pirates!!!

Anamaria: What does this have to do with the reveiw?

Elven: *blank look*

Jack: *shrugs*

Will: *reads what has been happening* It doesn't look like it has anything to do with the review...*whaps Elven* You are so weird!

Elven: *scowls* Better shut it, Will. Else I figure out what I can make you do in my story, and unleash on your MANLY self.

Will: *gulps*

Jack: *huggles Will and glares at Elven* Don't ye think you should get on with the review?

Elven: *shrugs* Not really, no.

Anamaria: *throws up hands in exasperation*

Elven: Oi! Fine! How about...WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THAT RAPIST SON OF A---?!? *gets tackeled and a hand clapped over her mouth to shut her up*

Will: What she means...*shoots glare at Elven*...is where is Charles? Henry seems to have some more information, and what the hell happened to Mr. Brown's mood swings?

Elven: *wriggles free of Will's grip* NO, what I was going to say was where is that punk BE-OTCH so I can kick his ass!

Jack: *snorts*

Anamaria: *bits lip to try and not laugh*

Will: *bursts out laughing*

Elven: What the HELL is so damn funny!?

Jack: 'Be-otch'? What the hell were you thinking? *resumes laughing*

Elven: *blushes* I heard it on TV....*hides behind hands* Better just go...*glares at the three who are still laughing at her* Bloody pirates...

Ta!

Elven

Yes, yes, yes! An update! Can't tell you enough how much I love this story! It's fantastic and we have more chapters to go! So looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing, Shara Nesu

I'm with Jack on this one; Will may forgive the little bastard, but I won't. I still wish bad things for him...
Anyway, it was nice to have an update, keep them coming.

I liked the story...but I don't like the latest chapter.
Did you need to have them all raped?
:-(
Well, and besides a question of logic:
I know this is AU
but the pirates are no longer of flesh and blood
they only seem to be.
They are walking skeletons (!)
which means the can't eat, the don't have any bodily functions
and that also equals they aren't able to use their cocks = ape ape possible!
Oh, and as much as I like love triangles I agree with the review that said it is impossible after what happend.
Obsession isn't so easy to leave behind.
Jake couldn't and wouldn't forgive Charles for being responsible for the damage
and hurt done not only to his friends but specially to Will.
Hello, several were killed because of Charles, he were tortured and the others raped!
No forgiveness from Jake = no love triangle.
Even if Will would ever be able to...
at

Oh, by the way where can we find the story "Pirate Dreams" ?
I would like to read it?
Can you or anybody help?

Jack: *huggles Will*

Will: *huggle Jack back*

Charles: *huggles cute new OC*

Elven: *does happy dance* No offense, but I'm not too big on the love triangle. You've already stated that Jack does not like Charles, and Charles does not really like Jack. Will was stated as not being able to see Charles like 'that' and Charles was borderline OBSESSED! I mean, how can someone fall in love with someone else who wanted to RAPE them?!

Jack: I agree wholeheartedly. And--wait...how did you get freed from the mast?

Will: Good question.

Elven: *does best drunken pirate (aka Jack) impion*ion* Yer forgetting one very important thing, mate.....I'm Captain Jack Sparrow!

Jack: *laughs* Very amusing. *motions to Elven*

Elven: *sighs and holds wrists together* The shackles? *frowns as Will ties her wrists together*

Will: You know it's for your own good.

Elven: *holds up bound hands to stop the gag from being put back in* But wha' about one thing.

Jack:'s 's that?

Elven: The OC I was mentioning earlier with Charles.

Charles: *Thinks* We have to give them a cool name.

*all four sit down to think*

Jack: Sean? Seth? Ryan?

*Ryan magically poofs onto the deck*

Ryan: What the bloody hell?!

Elven: Wait! He doesn't have any looks or character yet! *Ryan poofs out of the scene*

Jack: He's someone they meet in Tortuga. He bumps into them and helps them

Will: He has bright blue eyes and really straight long blond hair.

Elven: Is it just me, or does that sound like Legolas?

Will: *shifty eyes* Well, the author wanted to do a love triangle. What about changing the name to Orlando or something like that?

Elven: Will, you're making no sense.

Will: *sighs exasperatedly* I'm trying to say that since Jack doesn't like Charles, Charles doesn't like Jack, I love Jack, Jack loves me, Charles loves me, I don't love Charles 'that' way, can't the author just put in a character like me from another movie?

Jack: *falls down anime-style*

Elven: O__O;; 're 're insane, you know that?

Will: But it works!

Charles: He's right. It does.

Jack: *from place on floor* For once, Will made less sense than me, but the lad has a point, lass.

Elven: *throws up hands in exasperation* Fuckin' weird ass pirates... *grumbles*

Good job on making at least one of the cursed crew have a heart!

Ta!
Elven

And PLEASE! no love triangles! *pouts*