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Hi!
Lovely chapter! It was very impressive, Charles' attitude, and all I hope is Jack to forgive him... A triangle could be a very good idea. Ehhh... six times a day, and all the crew?? you are really naughty, LOL! Poor boys... :P
I am eagerly expecting for a new chapter. One question: where can I find that fic, Pirate Dreams, by ALex Tandra? I haven't read it and I would like to.
PLease, go on with the story!
Carmela.

Yay!
You didn't have Charles rape little Will. Although, my poor baby was still hurt. I don't really want a threesome, but it's your story. Although I do feel bad for Charles. And yay for Ragetti! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!! Oh and thanks for reminding me about Leave Me Lying Here,! I ! I totally forgot..... I'll go post that now. Have a great weekend hun!

I like how this chapter turned out like how Charles went back to the good side of thing though I do hope Ragetti is O.K. since he did try to save them all and isn't Barbossa and his crew still under the cruse? And ya I think it would be neat if you did the whole love triangle thing. Thanks.

Please tell me Jacks going to be awake when Charles tries to or does take will becouse jack is wills hero I think he should have a cape and evey thing.LOL Any way I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to find out how it goes. Thanks. It's an awsome story by the way.

YOU ABSOLUTELY DID NOT DISAPPOINT ME...THIS WAS SPECTACULAR!!! I LOVED THE SWEET TENDERNESS THAT JACK TREATED WILL WITH ON HIS FIRST TIME...SO SO SWEET, ENTLENTLE, SO FULL OF LOVE....AND VERY HOT NOT TO MENTION...

I REALLY FELT SORRY FOR THE WOMEN, BUT, I THINK THEY ARE PRETTY TOUGH AND WILL BOUNCE BACK BEFORE LONG...I HOPE THEY GET TO CASTRATE SOME OF THE BASTARDS....

AND CHARLES....WELL, MAY HIS COCK FALL OFF BEFORE HE GETS TO OUR SWEET WILL.......AND IF HE DOES RAPE WILL MAY IT FALL OFF AFTERWARDS...HEHE

DID I MENTION I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE...AND VERY SOON.....GOOD JOB, VERY GOOD!!

NEWENIT

Elven: *in the process of strangling Charles*

Jack: *watching*

Will: *also watching*

Anamaria: *grinning* Tha's right! You show him who's boss!

Tracy: O__O;; Isn't anyone afraid we'll get caught?

Jack: *looks at Tracy* I don't think /we/ would count as actually doing anythin'. Elven's the one who's doin' the stranglin'.

Will: *nods in agreement*

Elven: *still strangling Charles, who has turned a flattering shade of blue* Stupid...fuckin'...betrayer...GAH! *snatches Charles by the hair and hauls him off the ship*

Jack: (-__-) Now what are we going to do? Ye needed to kill 'im first!

Will: *sweatdrop*

Elven: *rounds on Jack* Do you want some of this?! Do you!? I'm not happy with the rapist son o' bitch! *gets held back from jumping over the rail and drowning Charles by Will*

Will: Easy there! We'll see what's in store, /later/, okay?

Elven: *gets tied to the mast by Jack* But Will--! *Anamaria puts gag in* (*muffled*) Damnit!

Anamaria: Don't worry, lass. It'll all work out, but only if you don't kill anyone before the rest of us has a chance.

Jack: Savvy? Though I rather enjoyed the show...

Elven: *sighs* (*muffled*) Savvy...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Elven

P.S. Great lemon!! ^__^ *does happy dance, but cannot do it very well for she is still tied to the mast* Damn...

Great work again:). I can´t wait to read more:).
Thank you.

Eeeeee!!!
I was right! Aww that was so sweet! My poor babies! I don't want them to be separated! It's just so sad and so good. I so can't wait for the next chapter so you better update soon! I'm so excited for the next chapter!

I'm so completely loving this story so fBut But you better give Anamaria and Tracy some good revenge action later on. Not on Charles, though, since I think all revenge action taken on him - and there should be plenty - should come from Jack. Okay, maybe Will can pitch in a little, but mainly Jack, yes?
Update soon, okay?
Cashiel

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
You can't leave it there!!!! Oh my god! This was soooooooo heart breaking!! I seriously wanted to cry! I don't cry!!! That was just so sad with them in the cell and Will confessing he's a virgin and that he's so scared, OMG!!! I just wanted to hold him and make it all better! He's so sweet! Bravo!! You damn well better update soon!! lol! I'm going to go crazy if you don't! Well.... crazier would be a more appropriate word, eh? hehehehehehe! But oh sweet christ that wo goo good! I think I know what Jack has planned, but I'm going to keep it to myself incase other poeple are totally clueless... don't want to ruin the surprise..... and this way if I'm wrong..... NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW! MUWAHAHAHHAHAHHAAHAHHAAAAA!!

Lydia NightShade