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*pouts* WHY!? I LOVE ANAMARIA! *glomps Anamaria*

*glomps Will and Jack, minding Jack's wounds* POOR JACK!! *cries*

Jack: *rolls eyes* I'm fine! Just get off of me!

Will: *eyes well up with tears* Jack! Don't leave me!

Jack: *sighs exasperatedly* ALL of you are BLOODY INSANE!!

Elven: *pouts some more, but releases Jack*

Anamaria: *scowls* Of course. The WOMEN get raped. WHY!? *shoots Ragetti and Pintel* I fell better now. *takes a deep breath*

Will: O____O;;; Didn't see that coming...

Jack: -___-;;; Women...

Elven: O________O Oh my...

Anamaria: ^___^ Much better!

Elven: O__o? Better go!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Elven

Oh no!!!! What a horrible situation!!! Aaarghhh!! I am dying for the next chapter, cos, it is going to be so good!!! I feel sorry for the women, good lord.

You are one hell of a writer!

Newenit

O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stupid stupid Charles, how can he do that? Will is never going to even talk to him again even if he manages to get Jack out of the way he has to know this.

And poor Jack trying to be truthful anding ing to Will, but all he got was the truth thrown back into his face....that is so so sad. Don't make Jack cry to much its unbareable. Pirate Captains arn't supposed to cry!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please post more soon I'm dying to know what happens next

:)

Whoa!! I really really like this story! The sweet love that Will has for Jack is so impressive, and so deep. Talk about intensity!!

I love the tale you are weaving here, and I cannot wait for more. Your story is simply awsome!

NEWENIT

I like I like this is an extremely awesome story and plot line I like how you portrayed Jack as a sweet and caring pirate where in the movie that side didn't show up until the end. And I came real close to crying when you had Jack and Will fight which was really good. So please up date soon so I can find out when they get back together they are get back to gather aren't they? Izzy

Eeeeee!!
I knew that Charles bastard was up to something evil! We hates him precioussssss, yesssss.... He's evil! I'll kill him! I can't wait for more of this! I'm so excited! I had such a shitty day too! Thank you for posting this and letting me have some joy in this crappy day!

Lydia NightShade

*eyes widen and fall down anime-style*

WHY?! WHY!? WHY!? WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME!?!?

Elven: *tackles Charles and proceeds to beat him up* *slaps Will*

Will: >o< WHAT WAS THAT FOR!?

Elven: For you being an ASS!!! *whaps him over the head* *glomps Jack*

Jack: AHH! Get off! What did I do to deserve tha'?

Elven: Will's being an ass, that's why. And you need some lovin', though I'm not going to bed you, Captain Sparrow. *giggles*

Jack: O__O Whatever, lass.

Will: Why am I being picked on by you, Elven?

Elven: *tackles Will and sits on his chest* Because you're being mean to Jack! Captain Jack Sparrow is going to have a broken heart due to you, and you know it!

Will: *sweatdrop and leaves room*

Jack: *grins and goes after Will*

Elven: O__O;;

Sorry, that was some ranting. UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN, SAVVY!?!?!??! I LOVE THE STORY AND I HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON!

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LOVE THE STORY! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!

Elven

Whobaby!
Ain't nothin like hot pirate slash man! Woo! That was damn hot and all yummy and goond jnd just mmmmmmrrrrrraaaaaaahhhhhhh!! Hehehehehehe! I should be study but but fuck that! I love this story too much! I can't wait for more!

Lydia NightShade

very clifferhanger...i want more!! no fair...i ver very good, you really surprised me. please keep doing so. but i want to the W/J romancek, ak, and i want more SOON! VERY SOON! who needs classes? j/k :-0

Amazing Story! I'm loving every second of it. Can't wait for the rest. Please post really soon!!! You're killing me here. Fantastic writing, characters, everything.

Thanks so much for sharing, Shara Nesu