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Uh oh the crew is starting to get mutinous....thats not good. Stupid Charles for leadit...t.....Glad to see that the whole crew isn't out to get Will and Jack....can't wait to read more about what Phil and Tracy are going to do...they should warn Jack or at the very least tell Gibbs or Anamaria of what the rest of the crew is up too.

Good job Will yelling at Charles like that.... I just loved that!!!!!

Can't wait for Jack and Will to really really get together....still it is really cute now how they are so no worries and we wouldn't want poor Will to be rushed into anything.


Keep up the excellent work and post more soon!!!! Savvy?

I want them to have SEX!!! MANSMUT ENSUES, PLEASE!??!?!?!?

*ahem* Sorry 'bout that. BUT THE THEM GET TOGETHER!! PLEASE!?!?

Update soon!

Elven

interesting idea for a story...i love it! they are cute together, though. can't wait to see where this goes...update soon!

Good chapter! Could have used a little more comfort though.... And whats with this rent boy???? Stealing Jack away from our Will that simpy won't do at all...I'm glad young Will decided to go after Jack! I'm seeing mush....lots and lots of mush :) You could always have him get attacked on his way to find Jack or something just for an added twist. Or he could run into Charles, and Charles could do something to him....(just a thought...not really thinking it will happen) Is Charles the bad guy in this fic or just a side character with much angst? I can almost see him hooking up with Barbossa just to get Jack out of the way so that he can have his way with Will. Well keep up the excellent work and I look forward to your next chapter!!!!

Just remember don't hurt our boys too much.... angst and comfort is always fun to read but remember don't put them through to much.


Post soon!!!!

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Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!!!!

But how can you end it like that....oh man....now I'm not going to have a life until you post the next chapter cause I will always be online checking to see if you have posted the next chapter. I'm so glad that Jack and Will got together in that chapter and I'm looking forward to soore ore Jack/Will in the next chappy. What was with Charles in that chapter yelling at Will calling him a f$%^toy? Now he's hurting Will and thats just not cool. You made a smile come to my face at Jack response to what Charles was saying. ha ha He even told Jack that Will loved him thats so funny....stupid Charles....he should have thought about what he said before he opened his big mouth. But ha ha ha he didn't. :)

Post more soon as I'm dying to know what happens next!

I'm off to read the chapter again.

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I haven´t seen anyone writing as good as you do!! You are really amazing and talented!!!
This is the best story i have ever read:).And believe me i have read well all of them...thousands. You have a great gift and i say to you. Use it and write some more after this:).
I write too. But i´m from Finland and i can´t translate it in english. Pity...
Go!!!:)

Oh this is sooooo good!
Yay! Charles didn't die! That makes me happy. But now I'm worried his jealousy will drive him insane and make him do things that will hurt Will! Oh no! It's so exciting! I do hope you continue and soon!! Go, go, go!! Write, write,te! te! ^_^

Lydia NightShade

Evil!!!!! How can you leave it there?!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!! I knew it was Charles! I fucking knew it! Oh is he the character death you mentioned? That would be so sad! Oh you better update soon missy! Rahr! And this isn't a peice of crap! Shame on ye!

Lydia NightShade

I just knew it!!!! The minuet that you wrote a crew member jumped over the side I knew it was Charles. Was he outside of Jacks cabin? Did he hear what Jack and Will were talking about? Did he decide to jump after watching either Will enter Jacks cabin late at night? Or after sneeking a peak through the dcraccrack and seeing Jack and Will holding each other? You know if you make him die Will is going to need a lot a lovin and who better to give it to him than JACK!!!! I'm detecting some comfort coming up. After all its all Will's fault that Charles jumped...

Well we know that it really isn't Will's fault but that doesn't mean that Will understands that! Update more soon....I want some comfort between Jand and Will. Can't wait :)

great job! i always love a well thought out au. anyways, keep on writing. i love it so far.