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This is such a teaser! I love the fact that Tessa is jealous. Jack was her first, after all. If you are still writing, please continue this story!

The vampire,
Aldys Annabel Clairveux

wow.this was...really good. I think you should continue this one as a proper story rather than doing more 1-chapter sequels. I wanna know what happens!!! I really, really, really hope you continue this coz it could turn out to be even more amazing than it is already!!!

So sad! She waited all these years, and he doesn't even remember her! Could you please update soon, I'm dying to fin out!!

I think I mentioned on my review of yopur other story that I love Sarah, so, by all means, please continue to use her songs. I'm happy to see a sequal to Into the fire, it was a very good story, and this one promises the same. I'm kind of sad to see that he doesnt remeber her, yet, but I suppose that is somewhat to be expected with the amount of rum I would suppose he ingests. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!

Oooh, very good! Please continue. I read the first part a long time ago ... pleased you decided to update.

This is going well, though heartbreaking. On a beta note, you mixed sexes in your writing a couple of times. Things like She could feel her heart beating faster in HIS chest and that sort of thing. Other than that, can't wait to read more!