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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It would become a generic 'save the girl' vampire story like 99.9% of all vampire stories with a female lead that isn't the kick *** slayer is(You know, like the second, less popular Lost Boys movie), hence why most people were HAPPY that the main focus was a guy and the tone was different--it's what made the movie so enjoyable: it was different, campy and fun, and for ONCE, saving the female lead wasn't the main plot point--even with Star included, she wasn't as focused on/as important as the brother/family bond and Michael.
Not to say your OC is bad (at least she's not a Mary Sue) and your writing is good (if not a little too rushed and 'modern' given the setting of the film. It's obvious you were born/saw it after it was released, if not long after.) but honestly, the story is just generic and done to death.
Not to say your OC is bad (at least she's not a Mary Sue) and your writing is good (if not a little too rushed and 'modern' given the setting of the film. It's obvious you were born/saw it after it was released, if not long after.) but honestly, the story is just generic and done to death.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I came upon this story, I had no idea what it was about just knew it was about vampires. I later realised that I had actually seen the movie "The Lost boys" when I was little. I liked it very much. And its a plus that one of my favorite vampires "spike" would pop up in this story. Truely incredible. I dont like the whole mate and love thing however, she doesnt seem like that type that acts real, or like a real person would when they see that they are eating maggots. So that kinda ticks me off just a bit. Anyways nice story, although a bit cheesy.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love ur story. buffy, lost boys X. this was so good i realy hope u up date soon!!!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story that i wish you would update
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Why have I never read this before?!
I like your interpritation of Michael and Sam, they seemed to be gits in the movie. . David won't try to steal her, will he?
I like your interpritation of Michael and Sam, they seemed to be gits in the movie. . David won't try to steal her, will he?
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wee boring, I'll admit, but interesting.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love where you're taking this. So far you've been very creative with the plot. I enjoy a story more when I can't predict what happens next-well other then the obvious. I had not checked for an update in a long time, but I'll keep checking if you keep updating. P.S. I hope things are going well for you.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*waves* Ohmygoshhi!
Ah, man, so glad I finally got my lazy-ass online and read this. I love it. It's really getting interesting.
Ah, man, so glad I finally got my lazy-ass online and read this. I love it. It's really getting interesting.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good to hear from you. Don't worry updating really soon. This story is worth the wait. (Hell, I stuck around for two years, didn't I?)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleas update soon i really like this story