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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Another chapter! ^^ Um...Perhaps Brandi has accepted this all so well is because she's in love? o.O I dunno. I just know if I were in her shoes, I'd accept it, too...(Not that I even know why I would!) Most likey, um, trusting your gut? *thinks* From what I've read so far, it sounds like Brandi could take care of herself at any time. Maybe her family just understands that and is not worried. Um, don't listen to me. Well, anyways, this was very well written and sorta humorous at the end. Can't wait for next chapter!
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i just wanted to say i love the idea and the story is goin good. a few things bother me though, what does brandi look like? maybe you could say she resembles a famous person or simply describe her. also, how come she was so cool with everything and somehow knew it was okay? where is her fear or guilt or worry over anything? i would just like to see more of her emotions please. anyways i cant wait for an update! lost boys rocks!!! david and marko were my favs;) good job!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I can't wait for the next. Short is fine just keep it comming; it just leaves us loyal readers wanting more.
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!Chap.3 Was GREAT!!!! I Can't Wait For Chap.4.Keep Up The GREAT WORK!!!!!
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I really am loving this story. Oh, and I don't care how short the chapters are. At least you updated. Keep up the wonderful work and I shall await more!
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You so need to update this! Great job on it overall and I can't wait to read more. :)
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so awesome! I think Brandi is really REALLY cool now, because I hate Star. She left Davir Mir Michael! Why would anyone do that? David is so much cooler. I still love your story and I can't wait for you to add more! Keep up the good work!
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January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Was worried we wouldn't get any more. Ie the the direction this is taking and can't wait for the next chapter. I'm with Melissa; keep Star in her place. Great work.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright!!!!! Love Chap.2,Especially When star Got Yelled at.I REALY HATE star.Keep Up The GOOD WORK!!!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT UPDATE BUT WHY THE SHORTNESS?? pLEASE UPDATE SOON