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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done, you really captured the characters. Especially the Marquee, with his snide vulgarity, yet sophisticated wording, I could just see his smirk. I was so thrilled to see fanfiction for this movie, thank you for writing it!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man was that sweet! There were a few glitches in the story which took a bit of thinking, but that's all minor, really. It's perfectly wonderful by itself and it makes a marvelous opening chapter if you plan on continuing this.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you're going to finish this or not. I would obviously love to read more but I think you left it off pretty well. The writing seems very true to the movie's narrative. Loved it :)
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a promising story, and it's disappointing to see it hasn't been touched in so long! I'd love to see further chapters here. The characterization is solid, the initiation of plot intriguing!
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is the begining of an excellent story. Please tell me that you're planning on continuing, I'm so looking foward to what happens next.