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for Crossing The Line

by scatteredlogic

person Leahcc
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOL Ooh who did Sara think she was fooling Jareth is the Goblin King for a reason. XD Soo cute and smexy. ^_^
person an-angel-in-hell
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very clever. the end was sweet
person Lady Shiva
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naughty naughty! Lemony fresh.
person Jill
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHhhhhh Excellent Fic!!!! I love it!!!
person katieryn
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was BRILLIANT!! seriously, really good. most nc-17 stories are full of obscene dialogue and dirty language, but that was very tastefully done. kudos to you and i look forward to reading more of yours
person allasrya
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoooo! that was great! I loved the thing about how they got each others' cherries! ;-)
person Klep
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I positively love this fic's setting! ^^ *gush* Sarah takes things iner oer own hands, but Jareth was actually playing towards the same goal. The touch of humor was delightful as well. Another masterpiece! =)
person wyrm of souls
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another great story! i liked one one because sarah was the preditor rather than jareth, and he was so cute with the whole "you stole my des' t' thing...lol! it was more romantic too :) this is a great plot line, and there are so many different things that could be done with it, you did it well tho, you have a knack for writing erotic stuff, more artful, and not tacky or vulgar. good work, i love it :D
person Morrigan
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! Well written...I love this story.
May we hope for more stories like this one?
person sandy
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!
That was incredible!
There are so many other things I want to say, but I'm tongue tied, IT WAS THAT GOOD.