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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a great one shot! Well written and erotic. I love how you brought the masks back into your story.
Well done!
Well done!
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
okay, you, my dear, are a genius...that has to be one of the top labyrinth stories i've ever read, especially for a oneshot!!! wonderfulood ood job! write more stories, you are really good, not only with plot twists and new ideas, but i also love your use of sentence structure and vocabulary. great job!!!
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November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done, an excellent treatment of the Jareth/Sarah dynamic with beautifullyttentten, subtle, erotic passages. Let's hear it for challenges!