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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start! I so love this story. Keep up the great writing, my curiosity is peaked.
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. I thought my cliffy-beast was an evil bitch, but damn! I truly liked this story, really, but erf! Why the cliffy ending? (sigh) Ah, well. I would really like to see a chapter 2 to this. It truly begs for it.
Kudos!
~NekuYasha
Kudos!
~NekuYasha
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah! this is wonderfulperfectamazingwow. I loved how you showed her thoughts...well, you know, when you put one word on the next line an italicized it? that. Stephan King did it first, but you know what they say- talent borrows, genius steals. Please continue!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice. very nice. you know I love your stories
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH! That was evil! Gonna write more, or leave it?
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't belie hav haven't reviewed this yet. ^^; Any the the "dark" quality in this is SO believable. Jareth radiates authority and power, which makes him extremely seductive in this setting...and any other! Sexy and lethal all in one! =D Wonderful!
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a very interesting story and one I can see happening. Jareth....always so handsome, dangerous and unpredictable.