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for Past the point of no return

by spikesbint

person Christine Rosette.
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
No..you can't stop there..I can't wait another two days.
person Angel Marie
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Awww...thats such a sweet ending! I loved that whole story! I like the way the story flowed. Good job! I can't wait to read your next story. I"m so glad you're my beta.
much love
angel marie
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
ok, wow. I love where this is going. only you need to add more soon so that we can see if raould is alive--and therefore making christine erik's--or if he is dead, causing many more problems for our viscomtess. oh, the tasty web you weave. I love it. I'
person Jess
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I'm a Phantom virgin. I've known the gist of the story for as long as I can remember, but I've never read the book, or seen it live on stage. The first time I've ever seen it was when it came out in theaters very recently. That said, this particular f
person jessickuh
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
So glad you added the epilogue. It tied everything up really well. I enjoyed reading this whole story immensely.
person Skimbleshanks
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
A pause, I can handle a pause!
Well I'm glad to see there wasn't a nasty cliffhanger! I would have hunted you down... and Punjab lassoed you!

I can never wait for the next chapter!

Mwah, Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx
person Mousey
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a beautiful work of art your story is! I've been absolutely captivated for the past two days, and I was never let down for a second. I must admit that I fell in love with your writing style; your sentence structure and your diction were beautifu
person Leslie
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
The Epilogue was wonderful!
I think it was a terrific ending to have Erik give Christine the ring from so long ago. Truly fitting!
You are an exceptional writer and I hope to read many more stories about our dear Phantom and Christine from you!
person sophie
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! its is so mushy! i love it!
person Leslie
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! You've managed to capture all the suspense, excitement and anguish of Phantom. Erik is perfect and his interaction with Christine is exciting and intense. I love the way the story twists with Raoul possibly being dead and Erik having to go