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by AnotherSparrowGroupY

person DarkBubbleGum
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD I am so sorry!
It's been on hetic week after another I fiI finally managed to get back to read this.
I just want to say that it was ome,ome, wonderful wonderful. you have totally out done yourself again and I just love this.
I'm glad you finally updated, I was getting worried that you had forgoten about us but alas you haven't adn I appluade the great slash chapter.
I can't wait to see what's still to come, in a matter of speaking, and I promise to review way faster than last time.

Great job yet again. GO YOU!G DaG
person Brina
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear anothersparrowgroupY:

Sweet Jesus on a pogo stick woman?!! Are you tryin' ta kill me by giving me a terminal case of mastabatory induced carpal tunnel syndrome?!! Not to mention that I am about a quart of blood low to all regions above my tlintline. Damn woman, you are good!! You saucy lil smut goddess you. winkwinks lasciviously at anothersparrowgroupY and smacks her on the ass :: Give us some more, luv. --Brina. the anothersparrowGroupy groupy
person Brina
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear AnotherspwarrowGroupy:

:: stares at ASG eye eyes as wide and confused as Jack (the monkey) often does :: okay. so how come i ahve two reviews of your story, both similar in nature, but one of which I don't remeber posting? Gnomes. I bet is was the gnomes again. Them d*mn computer gnomes. I see that they are back to their antics again. Changing my screen savers, overloading my computer with chinchilla porn, hiding rancid cheese underneath my bed, whispering crude messages in my ears at night . :: Pokes herself in her ears with cotton swabs to silence the voices. :: STOP IT!! Filthy lil buggers. sorry about the repeat post. however, i am still very willing to be your bitch and you are undoubtedly my smut goddess. :: rolls up ASG's story and smokes it like a cuban cigar :: ohh girrrrrrl... give us some more. ---brina. AnothersprrowgroupY groupie
person Crazy4Pirates
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story (grins) pudding for you!
person Captain Jack\'s Lass
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aha! An update! Although I believe I am a little late responding. I was so worried that you had abandoned us...but it's good to see that you are posting again. Another lovely little update...not a big fan of slash meself, but you pulled it off quite well. And now to see that Will is ready for another go. Does this mean we can expect more from this guilty little pleasure? I sure hope so. Maybe some more Jack and Ana, ock ack and Elizabeth perhaps?
person neverone
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great!
person lily
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
huzzah! huzzah! huzzah! we all bow down to your greatness.

I was sooooooo excited a new chapter!! and so luvverly full of delicious boy on boy action

please lots lots more soon!
person Mercurial
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD<---- Oh my GOD!!!!

...........

*incoherent mumbling... illegible drivel...*

*glomps you joyfully* You did it, you did, you gorgeous succubus you! You have transported me into some ethereal place where Will and jack and Eliza and Ana and beautiful people.... *squeee!!* You fucking beauty, you updated it!!

I am profoundly jubilant over this, I have never BEEN more hysterical over a piece of literature!!

*glomps you some more, and all the characters, and yoabulabulous muse!!*

A very much enamoured
~ Jenna.
person wintermoondancer
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Now, (rubs hands together in anticipation) how about Will letting Jack have it but good?
person Afan
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked to find a well-written fic here. No offense to you others, but this fic stands above and sets a standard not grasped by most of the others. Bravo! You have truely gained a hold on all personalities within the movie. I loved the J/E Action *purr* And though I don't like slash at all, it was well-written at least. More Jack/Lizbeth!