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Remember that "stream of obscenities" that Jack was breathlessly whispering..... I whispered it with him. *whimper* So how many licks does it take to get to the tootsie roll in a tootsie pop? er.... how many times does it take "little will" to be too tired? and hopefully no biting (well not too hard anyways). So what happens next? I am still bowing scraping and drooling to your smut goddess-ness. I have to say this very sincerely. I Love You. That's all I have to say now. *adoring eyes* *shivers due to dampness from recent cold shower*

Alright, this is absolutely the hottest shit I have read in a LONG time. I love Jack and Elizabeth's chemistry, such angst and fire! Wooo! They could burn the house down! You really captured the kind of thing that I sensed between them in the movie. (Course they couldn't put it in the movie or even a slight version, Disney after all, can't shock the kiddies. That mild scene on the beach was a little steamy for old Dis come to think of it. Course Johnny makes anything steamy. Love those bedroom eyes!) Great job with the other pairings too of course. That scene with Jack having Lizzie and Ana give him pleasure was really hot.

Woo! *fans self* This has got me hot and bothered. It's sinfully delightful, I loved it! Naughty Jack...Naughty AnaMaria...hell Naughty everybody!

HOLY CRAP!! This was a simply AMAZING story!! I ADORED IT!! My dear friend demoniclittlegirl or she is probably going here as darkbubblegum, sent me here.

I've lurked into this site to find good stories and found precious few. All slash and rape.. Not my flavor, you understand. BUT THIS!!! THIS WAS PERFECT!!!

PLEASE PLEASE E-mail me if you can and let me know when you've posted to this story again. There will be more right? Please?

Damn, Jack is sooooo hot.. Must see more of the quartet get it on. MUST SEE MORE!!!

Ta!

Please plepostpost a new chapter! I'm waiting for Will and Jack to get it on! This has been awesome so far - I love your characterization of Jack especially.

Jack/Will...yes, please!!! It would have to make him feel in pirate heaven to have both women, and a the lovely first-time Will in the same night! *blushes* wow, I really said that!

Please tell me that you are going to update this soon?! Please! I need MORE!!!

Very good chapter, very good indeed. I hope you continue soon.

AnotherSparrowGroupy: Not only am I now your groupy .. :: drops to her knees :: I am now your BITCH!! Girrrrrl... that last chapter was.. was.. :: feels her skin tighten as she figdets in her seat :: ..was.. Uhm. Uhm. Uhm. :: tries to form a thought and realized that she is about a quart low on blood as it all pools southward. How about i get back to you when the blood actually flows back to my brain? Coht tht thoughts are a problem right now. I shall also send you my bills for the mastabatory carpal tunnel sydrome that I shall undoubtledly come down with after this chapter. ;)

Oh my....

please tell me there's more of this one? :-p It's jost too smutty not to continue. ;)

--JBQ