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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't get to my computer yesterday so today I get the wonderful blessing of two updates! Excellent! This is the single best fanfic ever! I love it...and it does a wonderful job of getting us "all hot and bothered"! It drew me in because it had Jack and Anamaria...my favorite couple in the movie (why is it so hard to find stories with the two of them together?)...and it just keeps getting better and better. I think this is probably the best written scene between Elizabeth and Jack that I have read. I prefer a "darker" Jack and his "ravishing" of Will's inexperienced wife was wonderful. I can't wait to read more so don't keep us waiting too long...
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was...wow. I don't know what to call it. I love Jack, and he has a deliciously dark side in this one. I was more than worried about Will (sorry, I know I am too fond of that one), but I was sooo happy that you gave the last line to him. It made me laugh as Liz looked for him in concern and found him with Ana. Good for him, bless his sexy little heart. Thanks for the lovely update!
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*CHEERS* Yes! Another great chapter, thanks soooooo much! I really enjoyed it :))
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!! YOU WEREN'T KIDDING WERE YOU ABOUT THE FUCKING!!! PLEASE TELL ME THERE WILL BE MORE....LIKE WITH WILL....AND ANNAMARIE????
I LOVE WHERE YOU LEFT IT, WITH ELIZABETH LOOKING UP TO SEE HER SWEET HUSBAND GOING AT IT FULL FORCE WITH ANNA....AND I ESPECIALLY LOVE THE WAY JACK PULLED OUT OF ELIZABETH AND WHAT HE SAID TO HER....BUT, THAT'S NOT FAIR TO JACK...POOR GUY, HE'S GOTTA BE HURTING....ELIZABETH HAS GOT TO HELP HIM....
GREAT CHAPTER....YOU DID NOT LET ME DOWN!!
NEWENIT
I LOVE WHERE YOU LEFT IT, WITH ELIZABETH LOOKING UP TO SEE HER SWEET HUSBAND GOING AT IT FULL FORCE WITH ANNA....AND I ESPECIALLY LOVE THE WAY JACK PULLED OUT OF ELIZABETH AND WHAT HE SAID TO HER....BUT, THAT'S NOT FAIR TO JACK...POOR GUY, HE'S GOTTA BE HURTING....ELIZABETH HAS GOT TO HELP HIM....
GREAT CHAPTER....YOU DID NOT LET ME DOWN!!
NEWENIT
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I have never been to this site before, but here I am! This is the first fic I am reading here, and I must say, it's bloody fucking awesome! Yay for you! Please, write more while I wait here VERY patiently! EEEEE! I love this! More, Soon, Please!!
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I'm so pleased you re-wrote that for us, it's delicious, but how can you leave us like that! Next, next, quick!
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please, let's let Will watch Jack take care of Miss Elizabeth right proper.
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you! I love this guilty little pleasure and I'm so glad you have added another chapter. I'm sorry about your computer deleting some of it and I know how much that sucks, but know that your readers are eternally grateful for your rewrite. Can't wait to read more!
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry...just had to reply...HUZZAH! HUZZAH! HUZZAH! :-D
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You stop here?!? You CRUEL CRUEL WENCH! Just kidding! Love this story, want more. Need more good POTC SMUT! And it is such wonderful artfully done SMUT! More please, as soon as your muses permit!
C.J.
C.J.