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for Jack's Cure

by AnotherSparrowGroupY

person Seva
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, how is it possible for anyone to make you blush when YOU write chapters like that....*looks rather..ahem..warm..*

*falls off chair and is rendered unable to write another sentance coherantly...*

you dirty little vixen, lol, that chapter was truely stunning, and thanks to your a/n at the end of it i am awaiting the next intently! (not that i would'nt have anyway..)

fangirl, if such a thing is possible, of a fangirl! (thats you, if you don't mind being described as such...i see it as a complement.. :D)
**Seva**

person je ne sais pas, mademoiselle!
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... Evil place ta leave it, kitten, simply evil. This is most delicious reading. I hope that ypu continue soon with the next chapter. Why don't you put in more Ana/Eliz, eh? That part was most well written.
person Brina
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dearest,dearest, AnothersparrowgroupY:

I love you. That is all that i can say. I love you and all of your smutty J/E/W goodness. You are my hero. The sugar in my kool-aid, the pork in my beans, and the moon in my starry sky. :: drops to her knees and bows, offering her servitiude :: I love you. Please update more and soon. ---Brina "the anothersparrowgroupy" groupie.
person wintermoondancer
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very hot. last chapter was great. pleaeep eep going
person anon
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more.
person CaptainJacksLass
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this story the other night by pure coincidence and I am so happy that I did. This is excellent. I love combining the four characters together and having Jack and Ana teach the younger two...Jack is welcome to teach me anything anyday :-) but I digress. I can't wait to read more...and by the way, doggy style just happens to be my favorite position ;-) so I'm very happy to see it included.
person Kali
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just got my wisdom teeth extracted (ugh) so you need to update this to make me feel better, savvy?
person Flossie
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good God, woman, what an imagination you have........YAY!! This just gets better and better. What a treat, I had three chapters to read and I tried to "ration" myself to one a day to spread the naughtiness but I couldn't help it, just like W it it happened all at once! Fantastic, you are a goddess.
person Mercurial
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Jack's french at the end, intended to arouse Anamaria by the familiarity... and Will's helpless abandon... and Jack's unadulterated sensuality!... (and the descriptions thereof). More more more more more. *Glomps you* This is a magnificent fic.

Loving your inimitable and just GORGEOUS work,

A very content (but by no means sated)
~ Jenna.
person Tourniquet
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fans self and runs off to take a nice, cold shower* Woah... Hehe... *grabs Jack and runs*

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