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for Jack's Cure

by AnotherSparrowGroupY

person Junsachi
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the way you did this story. I almost died laughing at some parts. E-mail me when you put up the next chapter please!!
person NEWENIT
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! EXTREMELY WELL DONE....THIS WAS MASTERFUL INDEED!! AND YAY YAY YOR TOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...THE IDEA OF ROUGH FUCKING IS REALLY UP MY ALLEY....HURRY UP I'M DYING TO READ WHAT YOU DO NEXT....

NEWENIT
person Kali
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*yay* *dances* I love how you wrote Jack's noises :D are Jack and Will gonna get it on???? please???? love you muchly and UPDATE.... now.... can't wait....please? *big hug*
person Kali
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh ooh I just read Dark Bubble Gum's review and I agree.... I have Johnny Depp in a box in my closet- I got him for Christmas and I wouilliillingly donate him for the cause *drools*
person Sarah
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would have liked to see more Will involvement in your story. He does not get enough attention, but maybe be will in chapter seven.
person Sulwen
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good God...I doubted anyone could make such a pairing realistic, but...wow...I was wrong! What a wonderful concept, as well as perfect portrayal of the characters...for the love of all that's holy, keep going! :-)
person DarkBubbleGum
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Okay...It's 12:23 in the morning here, I'm sitting in my cozy little PJ's with a mug of Hot Chocolate (ironic?) and I read THIS!
I am so going for a VERY very cold shower after this! (I wonder is I would be able to find not so cold Liquid Nitrogen?)
That was absolutely amazing! Totally worth the wait. But there is more, ne?
You are going to continue?
Well, let me say, right now you can do no wrong! I totally loved that and I thought it was the best written thing I had ever read! I could totally picture the whole thing...which was fun *blush*

Can't wait for the next update adn i totally love you too, for writing this amazing and totally captivating piece of fiction. (pity that's all it is. Maybe if we write to Gore or kidnap the actors this can be played out for all us really freaky sad people...Hmm....that is porn I would watch...or is it tasteful French art?)
ANYWAY!
Can't wait for more, I'm keeping my end of our accord, you keep yours.

DBG
person loca
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O, evil! please update soon, I like it ;)
person anon
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More.
person Mercurial
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! I love you I love you I love you I love you!!! Please write more please! I need closure or inducement or SOMETHING.... God, I've wanted a fic that started like that for so fucking long you can't imagine... *breathes* This is what I wanted for Christmas, Oh yeah. You just made my LIFE you bloody beauty!!! I'm this far from constricting incoherency, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that was nice. *dies* Please, more. please. Right now I just want to glomp Jack and Anamaria all over their sensuous, kohl-eyed, sun-kissed faces (and lithe, delectable bodies).

Consider this a 20 out of 10 review. We need more like you. We (the community - fuck, the world!) need more captivating, erotic, stories like this.

A very happy, satisfied and thrilled
~ Jenna.