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for Sparrs Els Elf

by pinkwhirlwind

person supergirlanna
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great begining, hope to see more!
person Soar
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like this story and would like to hear more of it. You've got a good plot there and you leave me with a bloody cliff hanger!!! How on earth could you be so mean? And not to update on top of that? Gah, your driving me crazy! Well...crazy-er, but that's besides the point. The point is you need to update! SOON!
person Admantius
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your writting. I definately thin you should continue with this story. You capture Jack's personality perfectly. Keep it up!
person attirb
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Why don't you continue this great idea?
:-(
Please!
person XcAtX
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
r u going to update?
person mystkyten
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, can't wait to see where it goes. Please update soon
person attirb
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds very promising!
Please continue!
person Cait
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story. It looks extremely interesting.