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for A Dark History

by Hannurdock

person Crystal
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, even though it made me cry on a few parts. -.- Plus its a bit depressing that april didnt come on to any of them lmao. I so would. ^^ Yes im weird, being trapped ina cabin with a buncha guy sized turtles for weeks though could do that to some girls. I mean they have fingers/tongue's and im not sure about other parts but she could have atleast asked. I was sure that you were going to make something like that happen with her and one of them since you made that one guy her cousin, which by the way in the movie he isnt her cousin and I think they actually end up making out something feirce, but thats besides the point. Other then don dieing at the end it was an awesome story, and I enjoyed it.
person Xan Vega
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was so sad but I am not going to flame you. It was well writen, far better than any thing I can ever write.