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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, no...! Don't stop now..I liked the chapter..!
Don't erase the last two chapters, things were getting interesting! I want to see Will break and torture Jack..^^ Maybe with a drug or something..?
If you just have the energy and ideas to continue, please do!
Don't erase the last two chapters, things were getting interesting! I want to see Will break and torture Jack..^^ Maybe with a drug or something..?
If you just have the energy and ideas to continue, please do!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so.. was chapter 21 the last chapter?
or is there more.. which you have not updated yet?
ah!! if it is the last.. does that mean will is forever subjected to norrington's cruelty?.. like a huge cliffie ending?
or is there more.. which you have not updated yet?
ah!! if it is the last.. does that mean will is forever subjected to norrington's cruelty?.. like a huge cliffie ending?
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no dont u dare delete these chapters! i love them there great, carry on ! i beg you! please?
lol its a great fic.
update soon.
me xxx
lol its a great fic.
update soon.
me xxx
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your help you guys, i was really jammed up about it, but im gonna write this further now :D wieheeeee more torture :P
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
just wanted to say, don't erase the last two chapters, ending it like that!
Keep going, I liked this chapter...please don't change!
Keep going, it's great!
just wanted to say, don't erase the last two chapters, ending it like that!
Keep going, I liked this chapter...please don't change!
Keep going, it's great!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha alright, i wont
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this way has possibilties too, but whatever you want. evil norrington stories are fun sometimes...
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don't change it and make Norrinton (sp?) a nice, sombering, what's the british term...wanker. I like him as a cold hearted person. Please don't change it, I like how you made him. Dark, twisted, manipulative, I can't wait to read what he's planning for Will&Jack.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd ALWAYS thought that speculums were torture devices, even IN the doctor's office! You're wonderful! Keep it up, but PLEASE write faster! I love it!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'll try to explain it. Jack hates it not because it hurts more than with Barbossa, but the reason behind it, Barbossa did it just for the pleasure and the pain and the humiliation but Norrington does it just because he can. Norrington has always wanted this, to have a certain power over Jack
And he wasn't intending to take Will, but he does want him, as he showed on the Pearl, he made no move though because of the problems he could get, but now that Will offered it freely he won't refuse and he has a plan to keep them both from telling anyone, but just read, it will show
And he wasn't intending to take Will, but he does want him, as he showed on the Pearl, he made no move though because of the problems he could get, but now that Will offered it freely he won't refuse and he has a plan to keep them both from telling anyone, but just read, it will show