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for Will love be the saviour?

by loveforelves

person littlebird
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I fail to see why Jack should hate being fucked by Norrington if he liked being raped by Barbossa.
Besides, I think Norrington has far less power over Sparrow than Barbossa had. They are one a Navy ship; there are many witnesses who know Will Turner is on board and not under suspicion of piracy.
So Norrington cardlardly harm Will and get away with it. Barbossa could.
What I could imagine is that Norrington would blame Sparrow for getting Will in such a bad situation and thus making Elisabeth ill with sorrow. So he might punish Jack for that. He migth then even encourage Will to take "his revenge" on Jack.
person lovingelves
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah i changed it again, because i thought Will love be the saviour wasn't a very good title, but you're right, this might be confusing so i'm changing it back again (this time it stays with that hehehe)
person Frankenmuth
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did you change the name...again? I almost went over the update, not wanting to read it...but I didn't...Yay for good eyesight!

Anyway, I hope you update soon, I really enjoy this story (and I can't remember if I've reviewed or not)

person leann
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it! will our heros be torn apart? what will norrington do? wil jack get some decent clothes? more please more more more
person Jack4Turner
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TAKE WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Come on mate you know you want Will and Jack to both be Norrington's slaves!!!!!!! Don't leave poor Will in the hands of Barbossa any longer....

*Take him* ^_^

Post more soon savvy! Just remember have Norrington take Will and Jack with him.
person Lovingelves
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
leann: Don't worry, i love them too, why do you think i put so many in it? :p

Mahie Sparrow: I'm glad you like it.

Jack4Turner: Hahaha you made your point ;) well you'll see my descision soon as i'm writing the next chapter already
person leann
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am a complete and total sucker for jack comforting will scenes. it should be overdone, right? but no, they are always my favorate...oh yeah, good sex too.
person Mahie Sparrow
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This fic is great! Well,I'm not this fond of rape fics. What I like the most is the comfort that Jack gives Will. ;) It's a balm in that situation. I hope they can escape from Barbossa's hands. Maybe Norrington could help them after taking Jack & Will just for his pleasure. ;) Mahie
person Lovingelves
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Newenit: I'm glad u like the story this much, i really love ur story as well, about Will getting raped, it's very well written (and REALLY good)& always gets me in the mood to write on my story

Lydia NightShade: I was feeling slightly ashamed for not having read (or at least i thought) one of your stories. But it turned out i read the Johnny/Orli ones before, they're hot. I admire u can write Het fic, i know it shouldn't be so hard (or at least people tell me) but i'm not very good at that, i get uncomfortable so i'll stick with writing slash :p.

Lizzy: i dont know if you write as well, if so, tell me the author name u have and i'm gonna read it for a bit

I really appreciate the support i get from readers of my story, it makes me keep wanting to write, it makes it much more fun anyways
person Lizzy
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*still happy*

Yay! I hope you write more soon, I just love your writing.