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for Will love be the saviour?

by loveforelves

person Elvenlover
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
M.O.R.E is that clear enough ? Or should i say we want MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE come on update now on the double.
person NEWENIT
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When are you gonna post the other 2?

God woman, can you tell how anxious I am.....I've reviewed once, have come back several times to read....and now I beg you on virtual knees for MORE!!!!

NEWENIT
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I'm still reading. Now post the bloody chapter so I can read it as well!!!!

I'm having way muchmuch fun reading this!
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for awhile and just loving it. please update soon the wait is killing me.
person gact
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, but you have a bunch of grammical and spelling errors that can make certain parts a bit confusing.
person NEWENIT
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! DAMN!! DAMN!!! You are such a tease....man that was hot as hell....whoa!!!!! I liked it that Will got hard from watching....and liked it even better when Jack decided to help him out at the end of that chappie....now....get on with it....more ..... more....more.....

Did I say MORE?

NEWENIT
person Lydia NightShade
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'M STILL READING!!!

I WAORE!ORE! I WANT MORE!! PLEASE!!!!
person Lydia NightShade
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww!

Poor baby! That's so sweet though, at the end when Jack comforted him. I must admit I like the idea of Will in a spike collar... arrrrrrttttthhhh!!! Yum, yum, yum! Can't wait for more my dear, you're wonderful with the angst and such. ^_^

~lydia~
person Lydia NightShade
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank the gods!

I just read a chapter in a story and couldn't understand a damn thing that was going on. But this story makes sense to me. Thanks so much for the update. It's refreshing. Plus, I'm a little pissed off right now, not because of the story or anything, so this was a nice reprieve.

~lydia~
person lovingelves
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha i will type as fast as possible