rate_review Reviews

I'm so bummed out right now. I thought my laptop was finally fixed..... oh so wrong!

Please continue this story.... it makes me happy....

~lydia~

YOU ARE SUCH A LITTLE SHIT!!! HOW IN THE HELL CAN YOU DO THIS TO US???? HOLY FUCK!

WOMAN I LOVE YOUR EVIL TORTURE PLANS...YOU ARE HOT!! I WAS REALLY HOPING THEY WOULD USE IT ON WILL TOO...

GOOD GOD....HURRYWITHWITH WHAT'S NEXT, I AM FOAMING AT THE MOUTH HERE!!

NEWENIT

Oh lordie!

I'm so happy that they escaped! I was worried they'd never get away. Is Barbossa going to catch them? I'm so anxious for more.

~lydia~

This is a message to Melanie

if you think i am impressed by your sick words i can tell you im not, this is MY story and i will not change or alter anything because you want it, specially not if you can only curse which has totally no effect on me, if you wouldn't curse all the time and just listen to what i tell you, I wouldn't remove your messages all the time but your cursings like "fuck" & "bitch" just because you want to believe i copied it from someone are not going to stay, you can keep coming back but i will keep removing them.

Further if you believe i fell for that, that you have more 'friends' you're wrong, perhaps you think the world is as ignorant as you but to bring you the bad news: its not. And even if it is true then i have but one thing to say: you call me a coward but you're the one a. not leaving a name & b. no emailadress. which is the reason i expect it to be noone else but you Melanie

I asked the author of the story about it and as long as i haven't heard her opinion about this i will not seriously respond any further to your messages & keep removing them.

Seriously get a life g




To the other reviewers

thank you for your kind words, the story is far from over so i hope you will keep enjoying it. Your words are highly apreci
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I love Will. He is so smart to think of that. Poor Jack to endure such ..... ouch it just gotta hurt. Well hurry up and start writting. We wantssss more you savvy ;)

Bo’sun is sick! poor will n jack.. any chance they'll get their revenge?

only one way to find out muahahahaha.

jk.

I dont know if i will give them revenge, but i think i will.

Oh so good!

I thi this story so much. It's erotic and sweet. They are so cute together, definitly my favorite slash pairing. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter. Please post soon!

~lydia~

i'm so glad will didn't get hurt... is there going to be more to the story? i hope so

Arggggggggg Jack went so well and what does he do letting his guard down. I loved it. Come on more please before the monkey gets me