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I really like this. I think you should definatly(sp?) continue. Pweese?

Umm...damn that was good! Why is is that this is the only J/E NC-17 fic I've found?

Bravo!! I can say, unreservedly, and after seven years in various fanfic communities, this is without a doubt the best het fic I've ever read, period. This was beautiful. Wonderful. Superb. Thank you for posting this!

I love this story. Please continue.

undeniably sexy. well treated. the subject matter could easily have turned cheesy or unbelievable. You write the characters well, and , after all, thats what made the movie. You also have an uncanny knack for getting the sexy pirateness of 'Captain' Jack Sparrow right to the letter. Bravo, I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Keep it up! i'd love to read more of your work, esp J/E as you seem to have them down so well!

OH MY! I don't remember breathing thru most of that. You really seem to have Jack and Elizabeth down to a T. So many authors take what a character is and turn it into what they want the character to be. Keeping Jack...well...JACK can be incredibly difficult. But you're done a wonderful job. In the movie you can see bits and pieces of Jack's sensativity just before he turns back into the sexy scamp we love. You've played so well on that sensativity...dare I say vulnerability. Perhaps I'm just over analizing too much. BLOODY BRILLIANT SHORT MY DEAR!

ohhh. that's nice. Please don't stop.

i bow down to your story Jacvk and her are meant for eachother please write more

CHEATER!!! I saw that scene and I thought, "Damn, that would make some nice Jack/Elizabeth smut." You beat me to it!

Awe well. It was very good, and I'd like more of it.