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for The Point of No Return- COMPLETE

by SavageWords

person Koda
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seven.
Wow.
Just.
Wow.
<3
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! And a lemon with this chapter! You seem to be especially good with the naivete of Erik (and Chrisitine too, I suppose, though I can't quite keep my attention on her). Anyway, I really like it, hope to see more.
person Koda
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sob.
person Koda
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was referring to chapter 6. The quality of the story is quite the opposite of sob. It's great.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god oh my god oh my fucking god its amazing amazing AMAZING PLEASE PLEASE POST THIS IS THE PHANTOM CATEGORY SO YOU WILL GET MORE HITS OH GOD
person Anawye
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How very interesting! The way I'd like to the movie/musical end! *faints*
Of course, I want to read more as soon as possible. You're great writer.
person bellasera
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY...I am so glad to see you posted this here...another one of my haunts mwahahahaha....anyhoo I will repeat myself when I say update like now!
person sleepy_angel
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've only gotten to read 2 chapters so far, but I'm hooked! Can't wait to know what happens next! (^_~)