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for Yo Ho A Pirate's Life for Me

by Jack4Turner

person Lizzy
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the story very much, just the way it is I may note, *erm, yeah, I suck up to people who are writing good stories*

You are awesome! I ¢¾ you! *thinks* What are some other words of praise?

Wonderful!
Perfect!
Beautiful! *okay, am I pushing on the boarder of good taste yet?*

Anyway, write more soon! Please?
*I'll kidnap Jack and give him to you*
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that '¢¾' was a heart...but not anymore...
person Meg
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::grins:: This story is so good! I can't wait to see what else you do with it! Don't worry luv your sex scenes are wonderful! They're so hot and sweet at the same time! hehe anyway, keep writing!! You've got a great story going here!
person Mahie
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh,it was great! I especially liked Will and Jack making love on the chair. ;) Mmm...lazy moments...lol Just perfect. Please continue!!! Mahie
person leann
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh! it was great! lots and lots of wild pirate sex...yeah! i wonder what they'll do in tortuga?... anyways, write more please.
person Eci_Frog
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please more. I just loved the scene when Will was sitting on Jacks lap.
person Eci_Frog
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i almost forgot. I love helpless Will! And Anamaria please continue to slap Jack.
person Pirate_gal
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah so love the story so far....but where is the next chapter you promised us????? IF you don't hurry up and post one soon I'm going to hunt you down and beat you with a fish ^_^ J/K but please hurry and post more soon I really want to know what happens next Pir
person Isabel
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice smutty smut... three consecutive sex scenes (aren't we spoiled?). actually, i'd like to see will be the dominant one in the next chapter, while still being will (like a dominant will whose not turned completely pirate). Very well done.
person silverhope
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's okay. Everyone has their weak moments. It's nice to know that Will can accept being taken care of. Lord knows he has had very few people in his life to do it. What I want to know is Jack going to be able to accept that Will can stand on his own two feet? Also would Jack be able to accept Will taking care of him? Great job so far, keep up the good work. Please update again soon.