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for A Pirate's Heart

by AnotherSparrowGroupY

person jackfan2
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was very good. But, just to damn short! Just enough to tease us and a good job at that.

I really loved your first story, Jack's Cure, and am anxious for you to add a 12th chapter there. You will, won't you?

In the mean time, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this story as soon as humanly, or inhumanly, possible. I want to know who or what it was that broke Jack's heart. Great imagry there in that last line about his heart not being black, just broken. EEP.. *sob*

MORE MORE MORE!!!
person DarkBubbleGum
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW
You may be Smut Goddess but you totally have a nack for angst too. Short and sweet but so angsty.
Loved it, you have a talent that you must nurture, feed on the muses and give us the stories. I'm furthering our accord.
From now on I will read and review everything you write, no matter what it is. As long as you keep writing.
Kay?
Good. Continue then.......

DBG
person wintermoondancer
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, poor Jack. I would so gladly ease his pain.