rate_review Reviews

good story

This is one of the best written stories on this site....I mean it is so so hot, and you have it all planned out so well. I just love the way Jack took Will step by step, a little at a time. I absolutely love your descriptions, especially of Will. A beautiful man indeed, sinfully so, and so unaware of it...I think Jack took care of that in this story.

I would really love to see a sequel to this......I really would...

You are an excellent writer!!

Deb

Oooooh! Me likies! It was very good. I wouldn't mind a sequel (if you write it) |^_~|

I have to agree with Carmela with her view on there possibly being a sequel. Excellent work! I was completely invested in the characters the whole time, and that isn't soing ing that happens all too often with my ADD. I was a little surprised that Will wasn't a little upset waking up alone, considering his comment to Jack regarding everyone else in his life taking what they need from him and then leaving him, but that's just looking for fly sh*t in the pepper as they say. An amazing work and I hope, hope, hope there will be a sequel, Jack and Will still have quite a story to tell.

TJ Lymicus

Thoroughly delicious story, though I would watch the modern words and phrases. Still, hot and oh-so good! I applaud you.

Love It

Hey! I alreadevieeviewed this at a yahoogroup but I had to let you know again how much I loved the intricate disign of this fic. Unlike most slavefic it actually has a nice, stinging plotline to it. I swear I could barely breath the first time I read it. You're quite the writer and I love this fic so much.

I am very impressed. This story was beautifully written, the emotions just seemed to jump out at you. Your use of words to convey the images was awesome. I do hope you write a sequel.

Great job! One of the best fics I've ever read. I also loved Turning a blind eye, and this confirms you are one of my favourite authors. You're completely right about Will's character, and I think Bloom's performes it perfectly. There are several paragraphs I love: the one that begins "I want his respect -for him to be on his knees...", and that detail of Jack's hands shaking... A sequel? Well, I think it would be welcome, and even more: I think it is necessary. Jack has teached Will a lot of things, but now WIll should teach him too: Jack has to fotget his Master's ghost and learn that he can also be a slave not been forced. In other words: PLEASE, PLEASE, SEQUEL...

you know i love it pet but just thought i'd tell you again, your wonderful.
Rose
Sequel, please