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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was totally awesome and superbly written. Each story had a level of eroticism that elevated to a new level with each chapter....you could just feel Will's struggle with each chapter and how he finally has to admit to himself what he indeed likes and loves very much. I love his inititiation by Jack. Jack did a damn fine job too!
For that matter you did an even finer job of illustrating it....and I DO SO hoope for a sequel.....
NEWENIT
For that matter you did an even finer job of illustrating it....and I DO SO hoope for a sequel.....
NEWENIT
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I really like this story alot! Part of me wants to deny jack being a slave taker, I remind myself he is a Pirate! lol Thus capable of anything. That was show in the movie. Love how you kept Jack's gentle side in this as well. Really got into the story and could sympathize with both characters.
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aha!
I found this! I thought I'd have to wait until tomorrow for you to e-mail it to the group, but low and beholfindfind it here! Yay! This was sooooo excellent. I can't fully express how much I loveis iis in words, but I wish I could because you deserve to be praised. I loved the development and how the ending is bittersweet (I think). I felt so bad for Will in the beginning and now I'm not so sure. And I love that! It's just so fucking good. Bellisima!
I found this! I thought I'd have to wait until tomorrow for you to e-mail it to the group, but low and beholfindfind it here! Yay! This was sooooo excellent. I can't fully express how much I loveis iis in words, but I wish I could because you deserve to be praised. I loved the development and how the ending is bittersweet (I think). I felt so bad for Will in the beginning and now I'm not so sure. And I love that! It's just so fucking good. Bellisima!