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for Living the dream

by Mahierj

person bbb
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD, I can tell this may be a long story before we get to some REALLY J/W!
person leann
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please continue. i hope jack helps will out alot. *hehe*
person Willow
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ 'S good stuff this. I like it. Yay.
person NEWENIT
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH....YES......I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE THE WAY YOU ARE BUILDING THE TENSION BETWEEN WILL AND JACK....I JUST HOPE CRANE IS NOT GOING TO BE A PROBLEM LATER.....


KEEP WRITING....I'M DYING TO SEE THESE TWO TOGETHER.....LIKE REALLY SOON



NEWENIT
person Goldenkingcobra
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god. I god freaked out when the scream thing happened, God, I got so freaked I read like 400 words a second just to find out what heppened! WRITE MORE GOD DANG YOU!!!
person QueenyC
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really really really really like this fic please update soon.
person Grey Elven-Eyes
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM

*squees*

I LURVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*coughs* *glances at what was written* Okay, maybe that was a little weird.

But I DO like this a bunch! Is there going to be smut?! I hope so! *giggles* I am such a hentai. *shakes head*

Jack: Yes, yes you are.

Will: I agree with him.

Elven: *grins* So do I! Wow, guys, we're all on the same wavelength, aren't we?

Jack: *pats Elven on the head awkwardly*

Elven: *scowls*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Elven
person Lizzie
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story need more
person Rose
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beatiful, *sigh*
Rose