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for A New Life, A New Love

by Zephyrinblue

person Migya
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry up with the next chapter!!! If you want any help with coming up with the middle let me know and i will gladly help you out if it will help you put up more chapters quicker!!

B/c i love your story and i want to read more

Migya
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates!! You rock. I love this story!
person Anya3
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok first i have to laugh at the joke about the 'Mary Sue'. Im not sure if that was intentional but it was hillarious none the less. Next, update soon! I love this story. I know all about writers block in the middle of a story. Maybe you could throw in some more things about her future. Like she teaches him a song or Anna one or something..or she could make pizza for them somehow. I think they had the ingredience then...*blinks* not sure. anyhow, jsut suggestions!

Anya
person Keri
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot...keep writing...
person tracy
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Hurry and update please!!
person C.J. Davis
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, am really enjoying this! I understand about the middle story, I have the same problem myself! Can't wait to see what Jack l lik like all gentlemanly! Probably just as good.

C.J.
person ValidatedHatred
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i know exactly what you mean about the middle of the story thing. its like grrr why cant i just get on with it already? but you're doing a very good job... and you're making me want more! please post an addition soon!
~VALIDATED HATRED~
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!! I love this story so much.
person lolita
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very exciting well written story and I think that you have a lot of talent. I am really enjoying this and think that writing of your caliber should actually be published. Thank you for the entertaining read.

Lita
person Calypso Maxwell
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its me again... WRITE MORE!!! I drool for it;) hehe... Your good. A few spelling oopses... but hey, we all do that. *Hands over Jack plushie* desedeserve it. I'm off to hunt my own hottie. I'll be waitng for more installments in the meantime.