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for A New Life, A New Love

by Zephyrinblue

person Liv
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I’m afraid we have no more time,” Jack replied. “Thank you so much for your hospitality, Miss
Hanes, but we really should be getting back to our ship.”

Don't you think this kind of line is a bit OOC for our Jack Sparrow? Sounds a lot more like proper Norrington to me!
person LilDawn
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is truely a great story. One of the best I've read! I hope that you keep up the good work, and post again soon, I cant wait to read more. And about that Blow up Captin Jack......... Sorry can't help ya there, but I'll keep an eye out for ya!


Drink up me 'earties Yo Ho!
person Tarrin
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, i'm so happy as to everything that turned out, it's brilliant! can't wait to read more, as usual, lol.
person Aislynn
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that story is amazing! I love it soooo much! Forgive me for not reviewing earlier... but s ams amazing!! keep up the good work! Aislynn
person Tarrin
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter! it was so romantic, i can't wait to read more!
person C.J. Davis
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again the Pearl is being hunted. And when will we get the next update so we can see what the outcome is???

C.J. Davis
person Tarrin
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome PotC fic, update soon, i can't wait to find out what happens!!!!
person Aerial
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love your story. can't wait to read more! =P
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i need another chapter soon!!!!! i love this story it is wonderful!!!!!! but i feel a twist comein up do you have something up your sleev???? well anyway get the next chapter up sooooonnnnnn!!!!!!!
person SesshoumarusMistress
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again another lovely chapter... I really like this story, you;ve got me hooked!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ write more and update ASAP, savvy?