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I can't wait for nightfall either !!!! Update ASAP! Luv ya

Woah. Thats some story girl. Your form is amazing and its very authentic.
I hope you update soon:p

Love
Cat

This story is great! Ireally like what you have developed it into, please continue!
Carmen

Kudos for a most excellent PotC fic. I'd have to say, my favorite one an AFF.net. Jack is perfectly characterized to the Jack in the movie, not like other fics that totally change the characters, which really bugs me. And I could just totally see Norrington, the way you described him, your characterizations are PERFECT! The storyline is wonderful and it keeps everyone wanting more. And of course, all of us Jack lovers are sitting here picturing ourselfs as Rachel with dreamy looks on our faces. **sigh!** heehee. Well anyways, this is an excellent story and I can't wait to read more!

Again a great chapter !!! ( not that I didn't expect something else of course *bats eyeslashes* you keep me hooked on your story!! Keep going! Kisses, Miss_HighSchool!

First of all, nice touch sinking the Mary Sue. May she rest in Davy Jones Locker for all eternity!! *hear ye!* oh dear, the voices have started again. Superb story. Wonderful. Not much else I can say but the little annoying facts that I always point out. I know you'll roll your eyes, (everyone else does) but you need to be careful when using to... you used it once in the wrong way, spelling it to instead of too the way it should have been, but hey. Thats all i really noticed aside from Mary sue. Great context, wonderful story. You've left me wanting to hear the end of it, but as I am thinking on it, do you not plan it? I finished it and wonder if you will write about the next few months and running from the bounty. Anyway. It helps me think of writing a fic on POTC. So far I only write of what I dream. Thanks for the story.

O_O you have me hooked...... im addicted. There is so much humor and dry wit in this, i absolu lov love it! It is written so well!!! You have done an excellent job! Please continue with the good work! Write more and update ASAP!!!!!!!!!

More, more, more!!!! I just love this story! Hope it goes on forever!! kisses Miss Highschool

I can hardly wait for you next update. Keep up the great work.

C.J.

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! Hehee.....I LUV this story!!!