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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I made a little mistake in my review. It's not "Admiral" Norrington, it's "Commodor" Norrington. Excuse me, and please forgive me.
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work !!!!
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Bounces up and down.* Must...have...more...
Lovin' this story! (^_^) Keep it up. ....Wonder what the Commodore wants...
Lovin' this story! (^_^) Keep it up. ....Wonder what the Commodore wants...
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was a very nice sex scene!! I wish that Jack Sparrow wouldk mek me like that!! My God he is so damn HOT!! Sorry I got a bit carried away! Thanks for another great chapter! Keep it up!
Inusgirl
Inusgirl
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I really love it! One little detail though to make your story accurate with the movie as I'm assuming your story is post PotC. The Interceptor was destoyed when the Pearl caught up to her. Remember, it exploded. Perhaps you could change Admiral Norrington's ship to the Dauntless which wasn't destroyed. Or make up a new ship that takes the place of the Interceptor within the Royal Navy. Or don't, it's your story. I just always have problems with little nit-picky things. If you don't want to change chapter 13, maybe you could make the name of the ship the Interceptor II. It would be accurate with realistic ship names and I know boats as I live in a fishing community.
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January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as always, you left me wanting more. Keep up the good work!
C.J.
C.J.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter... people usually go on about short chapters, but in all honesty, what it lacks in quantity it makes up for in quality... please... more more more!!!
xxx Sev xxx
xxx Sev xxx
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That sex scene was just sizzling! I loved that! wow... you know you can`t stop now... you have to keep going... am gonna carry on checking back every day!
(^=^)
xxx Sev xxx
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xxx Sev xxx
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So what's next?? Loved the two chapters! I can hardly wait to read more! The bathtub scene was funny.
C.J.
C.J.
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh very nice! I like the plot, and the love story is nice, very real and not sickening like most romance novels. ^_~ (sorry all you romance-novel lovers, but I hate them). The Dialect is nice, er ter than mine by FAR. Please, do continue. I'd like to see more of this work.
Read!
~Melantha
SHAMELESS PLUG ALERT:Read [u]Merry Widow[/u], by me!
Read!
~Melantha
SHAMELESS PLUG ALERT:Read [u]Merry Widow[/u], by me!