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person Anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this!

This line was great -

" 'Sides, he didn't want to believe Bootstrap a pirate; damn sure he wouldn't believed the rest. "

Ha, well-done!
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That's sad...it's so well written...but it makes my heart hurt to think about...especially because it's believable. You wrote Jack's voice so well (though some parts I had to read over twice to figure out what he meant). I think 'Why God Made Rum' is a cooler title...but that's just me. Oh...I can't get over how sad that makes me...*depressive sigh* I need to read some hard, heavy smut or something...gah. Oh well. Good job anyway, it was lovely. ^_^
person AnAngelInHell
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* it's great. very sad, but very good. Hurrah for Jack/Bill.
person Corvis
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good, I never thought of will turner being alive at the bottom of the ocean for 10 years. That was sad, but that was a really kick ass shot!
person Ping
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Probably one of the only stories out there that address Bootstrap's 'death' or lack thereof. The speech patterns were brilliant! I could hear him talkin', and as I've done a New York accent before with a great deal of aching and moaning, I have the utmost repsect that you managed it so prefectly! Great story, very emotional and well written, all around!
person Amber
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wjoa.. I loved it. Defin makes me pity Will's dad even more.
person JenIsLikeWoah
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very, very nice. Well written piece of lovelyness. Jen <3 Jack Sparrow ...and I can honestly say I never thought of him and Bootstrap Bill together. That really should've dawned on me and I'm kind of ashamed that it didn't. Anyways, awesome little fict.