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by agentsculder

person Adriaane
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This is the only Erik/OW fic that has ever gripped me. Your writing is excellent and your insight into the complex and depp characters you've created is intriguing to read. I look ofrward to more!
person Kristine
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
...I swore to myself that I would never like reading an Erik/OC. Mandy O's "An Eternity of This" was to be my only exception.
...But gosh darnit, I think I might like Gianna. :) She's not a Mary-Sue, thank GOD, and she's got character. I only ho
person Di
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Why does everyone in this phandom have to be such a tease!? Lol. =yanks her hair out= soooooo unfair...but good
person bosho
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Please don't make us wait too long. Poor Gia, she's more than a little twisted in her thinking isn't she? Maybe they can both heal together.
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love the start of this story!
A nice lead-in to what seems like it will be great reading!
Your descriptions and details make everything very easy to imagine.
I also like how you have explained Erik's absence and his continual feelings for C
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
OHH! I can feel the plot deepening!
Very nice explaination of Gianna's past. Now both she and Erik have a common bond! (Big smile!)
Erik is watching her too! That must mean he is interested even if he's denying it!
I also like the detail that Gian
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

Wow! Now Gianna knows the Phantom has been to her room! I wonder what sort of interesting things will happen after this? :)
I have become COMPLETELY hooked with your story. It is very well written and is quickly becoming one of my favorit
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4
(Breathless) Wow! You write an incredibly seductive Phantom! Truly wonderful characterization of Erik!
Now he's in Gianna's room! I'm wondering if the sparks will fly!
You have been bumped up once again on my top Phantom stories. Thi
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5

(Fanning herself) Incredible! There definitely is a mutual attraction thing going on there even if they won't admit it!
I like the way you write Erik as a strong character. Some people write him on a more emotional level but it makes him
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
(Big smile) Erik is taking Gia to his lair! Yeah!!!
As you can tell from the reviews, I'm whipping through your story. It is very hard to stop reading!
I have a question. Is this the same building that burned? I thought it was from the beginning c