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person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7

(Eyes glazed) All I can think to say is Wow! That was an incredibly sensual chapter!
Very nicely done and full of passion and suspense. The suspense being when will they kiss again!!!!
I love the part where Erik looks at his appearance i
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Uh Oh! He's writing letters again! I wonder if our dear Phantom is up to no good?
Another super chapter! It would seem our dear Phantom is having some trouble controlling himself when it comes to thinking about dear Gia! (Big smirk!).
So
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

(Dumps glass of cold water over self) OMG! I thought I would spontaneously combust during this chapter!
The part where Erik corners her in the dance room! (Fanning herself) Whew!
Okay, you're being boosted up to my No. 1 favorite Phanto
person Anon
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Bravissima!!
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10

What a wonderful chapter! Erik thinks that he can have Gia and her heart might be the only one affected! Somehow, I think not! :)
Very suspenseful chapter too! I keep wondering what Erik will do to Christine when he sees her again! Can'
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11

Wow! Talk about an emotional rollercoaster! I was all caught up in the sensual spell Erik was weaving on Gia and the next minute you see his tender side come out as he comforts her. Truly a complex character!
Loved this chapter and I'm
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

This was a pretty deep chapter but I really liked it! Erik's description of his early awareness of Christine before she knew him was wonderful. Very phantomlike!
I love his description of Raoul. Truly, Raoul's character does come acros
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13

Yeah! Erik bought Gia a dress and a stunning one at that! I'm sure the sparks will fly when she wears it! :)
It's wonderful to see Gia and Erik are thinking more and more about each other. This is a great build up to the day she perfor
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Oh, oh, my (starts fanning herself). This is truly delicious suspense! Erik has taken her back to the lair and shown her his bed! I can't wait for the next chapter to find out how this will all work out but I'm pretty sure I know! (wink
person Sparrow\'s Pearl
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15

First, I want to say do not be the least bit nervous about this chapter. It was wonderful!!!!
I loved the fact that both Erik and Gia are unsure how the other will react to them and are tenative at first. When they do become passionate to